Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!
This week, I’m afraid my link to the prompt is tenuous. The picture is of a place in Holland, I think, so I’ve written a story set there.

PHOTO PROMPT © BRENDA COX
In the Keukenhof Gardens
I walk, gravel scraping beneath my feet, and a gentle breeze stroking me like the tender fingertips of a lover. Scarlet and golden blooms murmur beside the dark lake, their scent glowing.
Faint music hangs like wood-smoke in the air, luring me onward.
The music swells, raucous dance-music on a mechanical organ rasping in a harmonious dissonance, while people laugh and applaud.
All the world’s emotion shrills through those organ pipes.
I sing.
I dance.
My tears flow warm and comforting as I see my part in the dance of life and rejoice that it holds so much of love.
Some lovely sensuous detail. I was struck by the music like woodsmoke
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Thank you for your detailed and kind comment, Neil. I wanted to write something more emotional/sensory rather than intellectual this week.
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That’s such a happy pleasant moment
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Thank you for your warm comment, Larry.
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This sounds like what it’s like to be in love. When one floats more than walks.
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Thank you for such an honest and open comment, Nobbin. I understand your comparing the experience to being in love, but it was actually (yes, it’s a true story) more mystical than that. Although love certainly came into it!
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Penny,
“The dance of life” in tune with the Spirit of love: our hearts yearn for such joy and peace, and nature in all its glory gives us the sweetest sense of it!
pax,
dora
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Such a beautiful prose passage!
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Thank you for your lovely comment, Jade.
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You’re welcome. You took me there!
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Thank you for your responsive comment, Dora. I’m glad my story resonated with you.
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Beautiful descriptions in a great take on the prompt.
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Thank you for such a warm comment, Athling.
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Loved the images that you created with this
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Thank you for your kind comment, Michael. I’m glad you liked the images. The gardens are stunning to look at and walk through, and somehow extremely tranquil. Except for where they had the steam organ pumping out traditional dance music, of course!
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What vivid wonderful descriptions. Well done.
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Thank you for your helpful comment, Mason. I’m glad you found the descriptions vivid.
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You’re welcome.
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What a joyful piece! Simply beautiful Penny.
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Thank you for your lovely comment. I’m delighted the joy came across; it was a very joyous experience.
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This piece is almost poetic, and I’m glad it ended happily. I was worried for a moment that this was a spiritual release… although worried is the wrong word, because it would be a good way to go.
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Thank you for your very thoughtful comment, Elmo. This is in fact a true story – well, as true as a writer of fiction is ever likely to manage! I can’t put it in a box that characterises it; there was an element of mysticism involved. It was a brief, very moving experience that brought both acute joy and sadness.
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The scene is so beautiful and well described, it took me right in.
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Thank you for such a kind comment, Gabi. I’m glad the description drew you in. The gardens are very beautiful.
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Your description makes me wish I was there right now 🙂
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Wow! Thank you for such a lovely comment, Ali. I’m delighted that I was able to share a little of the joyous experience through my description.
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Dear Penny,
So full of beautiful description and feeling. Tenuous connection to the prompt is good enough for me. 😉 (It’s all about what you see). Thank you for taking us on a delightful emotional journey.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thank you for your generous comment. I’m delighted that you enjoyed the emotional journey. It’s a true story (well, mostly true!) of an experience I had a few years ago, the memory of which I treasure.
Shalom
Penny
xx
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I could almost my mind wander aimlessly as we walked through the gardens. Nice descriptive work.
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Thank you for your kind comment, James. The Gardens are very much the sort of place through which you can wander with your mind in neutral. I’m very pleased that came across in my description.
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Lovely descriptive and uplifting piece, Penny. You’e really nailed it with this
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comment, Michael. I’m delighted you enjoyed the piece.
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A tender and moving piece Penny, I love the way you build up the scene.
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Thank you for your lovely and thoughtful comment, Francine. I’m very pleased that you liked the way I built up the scene.
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This was a very beautiful and descriptive piece, Penny.
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Thank you so much for your kind comment!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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