Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!
Manifesto
Sister, you know there’s something wrong with the world.
Men continue to rape the environment despite global warming. They build nuclear weapons which will poison the biosphere for ever. They slaughter civilians in vicious, local wars. And all for status!
It’s time for women to save the world from this madness.
We take our name from the ancient Greek; we are Maenads. We foresee the future, but unlike our predecessors we do so through sobriety and careful planning. Together, our strength is irresistible.
If you want to join us, sister, look for the mask of Dionysos.
You will be welcome.
I like it that their symbol is the mask of Dionysus. The Dionysian cult was a fascinating sideways step from the orthodoxy of Roman life, not at all the bacchanal we now believe it to be.
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Thank you for your kind comment, Neil. The Maenads were said to have supernatural strength when they worked together – ripping trees up by the roots, and tearing bulls limb from limb.. I’m glad you like the idea of the mask as our symbol!
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Relevant point aptly shared.
Yes, we need to unite to save the world.
Women have the power!
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Thank you for commenting, Anita. I wish it were true that we have the power, but I fear we’re a long way from that state of affairs.
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I loved the draw on Greek mythology, P. I’d enjoy seeing a showdown. Perhaps at the end of the day, it would be ideal if men and women work together for the greater good?
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Thank you for your appreciative comment, Tannille. I hoped this story would appeal to you! Do you think men and women could work together for the greater good? I think there are many hurdles to be cleared before we reach that desirable Utopia.
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I think human nature is too flawed for Utopia on a global scale. But, I do believe there are pockets of good men and women who do work well together and hopefully their influence grows.
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Now this is what I call a ‘womens’ movement’. Nicely done, Penny.
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Thank you for your encouraging comment, Sandra. You can join the movement if you like!
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I agree, only the woman can save us now! Great story, Penny.
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Thank you for your appreciative comment, Mason. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
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You’re welcome.
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I agree wholeheartedly…
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Thank you for your supportive comment, Ain.
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What a call to arms from the sisterhood of the fiercely determined! Love how you wove mythic elements into this manifesto, Penny.
Pax,
Dora
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Thank you for your generous comment, Dora. As with most fiction there is a kernel of truth to the story, and your identification of this as ‘the sisterhood of the fiercely determined’ is exactly right. I enjoy using mythic elements occasionally; they’ve resonated down the millennia and carry great power.
Pax,
Penny
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My kind of revolution: sober, passionate, and unified with feminine power. YES!
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Thank you for your appreciative comment, Lisa. There are some wonderful young women spearheading a drive for change in the way we live as global citizens. I hope they are more successful at it than my generation.
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You’re very welcome, Penny, and ditto on the hope.
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I’ve noticed that women are everywhere, and I am all for the end of senseless war.
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Thank you for your supportive comment, James.
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Time for the men to step back. Over to you ladies!
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Thank you for commenting, Keith. I wonder how men would take to working co-operatively rather than competitively?
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Dear Penny,
The women certainly couldn’t do any worse than men have done. Love the powerful voices in this.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you for your supportive comment, Rochelle. I’m so glad you liked the voices. I wanted to make the indictment as powerful as possible.
Shalom
Penny
xx
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Women are still a long way from realising the dream but the journey’s on and your story is beautifully written.
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Thank you for your encouraging comment, Jilly. As you say, the journey’s on. I really hope I see the dream start to be realised.
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I thought of the Amazonian women, strong and powerful, easily controlling the men. The only way such a thing would be an improvement, though is if the hearts and souls of all women were joined in unison for the improvement of the human race. I wonder how long it would last.
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Linda. You put your finger on the weak point of the manifesto; it would be difficult to maintain the purity of purpose of the first ‘revolutionaries’. I would pin my hopes on the different ways men and women work together. It’s a wild generalisation, of course, but a group of women is more likely to work collaboratively than a group of men. It’s this preference for co-operation that gives me hope that we might do things better.
With best wishes
Penny
xx
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Well, let’s see. Women got the vote here in the States about 100 years ago. Doesn’t seem to me that things have improved much!
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I love your manifesto, Penny! I like to think things would be very different with women in charge. Of course, we are still far from achieving this… Hopefully as we climb the echelons, we don’t fall into corruption as the men have …
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Dear Dale
Thank you for your kind comment, and for the enthusiasm you have for the manifesto. I really think we would do things better, by our preference for working together rather than always competing. One word of caution; although we’re climbing the corporate ladder, we’re doing so in a world where the rules are set by men. That means that we risk having exactly the same flaws in society as with men in charge. As you say, we must beware of falling into corruption.
With best wishes
Penny
xx
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That is what I fear as well. We have to beat them at their own game before we change the rules… In the process, we might lose sight of our original plan…
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Your comment reminds me of the aphorism “When you’re up to your a*** in alligators, It’s hard to remember that the original objective was to drain the swamp!”
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Haha! How true is that!
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They say that power corrupts, certainly it encourages the flaws to deepen.
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Michael.
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Interesting and unique take. Like it. Great Story.
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Thank you for your kind comment, Bear. I was really stuck for ideas until I saw the mask of Dionysos above the wine cellar!
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An eloquent and heartfelt manifesto. I like the reference to the Maenads and their power as role models.
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Thank you for your generous comment, Francine. I’m glad you liked the reference to the Maenads.
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Strong writing for a strong purpose. Good job. I’m wondering how you came to use “sobriety” and “the mask of Dionysos”. They feel almost contradictory.
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Thank you for your very interesting comment, Eugenia. You’re right that the Maenads worshipped Dionysos, and had a reputation for drinking to excess. Drunk, they would dance themselves into a frenzy after which they could prophesy. Working together they could achieve feats of strength that were savage in their intensity, for example, uprooting trees and tearing bulls limb from limb. It was the strength of working together that I was hoping to harness to propel my story, so the excessive drinking was a bit of a distraction!
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yep, the talibans do exist for a reason. 🙂
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Dear Plaridel,
You are a very naughty man but thank you anyway for your entertaining comment on my story!
Pax
Penny
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Ah, for when we work together, there is nothing we cannot do. Legendary strength and all. Nicely done!
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Thank you for your supportive comment, Na;ama
Yes, working together is so important, especially with climate change threatening irreversible and catastrophic damage to the biosphere. Legendary strength will be essential!
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Your initial sentence is certainly true. There is something wrong with the world. I love your answer to the problem. Let the women have a chance! I also enjoyed the Greek mythology twist. Well done, Penny!
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Thank you for your kind comments, Brenda. I’m glad you enjoyed the Greek mythology twist.
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I’m leaving my political commentary out of this, Penny. 🙂 Intriguing tale. I agree that the old-boys-network-white-blokes-patriarchy must be stopped in order for us all, and especially the children, to survive in the future.
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hope they succeed and save the world
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