Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz (the blue frog) on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!
PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Love’s fragrance
“Those are pretty flowers, Mommy!” Helen leaned across the table and stroked one of the petals very gently.
“Daddy gave them to me,” smiled Imogen. “Today is a special day – we’ve been married for ten years! They’re made of glass and metal, and the shiny yellow is real gold.”
“Do they smell nice?” asked Helen, doubtfully, leaning close to them and wrinkling her nose.
“I’m afraid not, honey, but they’re beautiful, aren’t they?”
While Imogen busied herself preparing supper, Helen ‘borrowed’ her mommy’s favourite perfume.
“Why, these roses smell just like you, darling!” exclaimed Mark when he returned that evening.
Sweet little story. Captured a child’s inquisitive nature.
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Dear Tannille
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you liked the way I depicted the inquisitive child.
With best wishes
Penny
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Dear Penny,
What a sweet scented story. I wonder if Helen will escape punishment. I think she should. 😉 Lovely and imaginative.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS The roses are actually real. They dip them in some kind of lacquer and tip them with 24 K gold. My husband is fond of buying them for me for special occasions. 😀
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly, and thank you for the information about the flowers. I was sure the edging on the flowers was 24k gold – the shimmer is unmistakable. I’m interested that they are natural flowers encased in lacquer. That gives me a whole new story…
I think they’re lovely – lucky you!
Shalom
Penny xx
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Thanks for explaining the roses, Rochelle. I couldn’t quite place what they were and my only reference point was cemetery flowers, but these were clearly meant for indoors and had a gentle beauty that wouldn’t survive the weather. They’re rather beautiful.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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This was so cute, Penny! 🙂
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Dear Netizen
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you liked the story.
With best wishes
Penny
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How sweet. Lovely 🙂
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Dear Iain
Thank you for reading and commenting. I felt the need for something sweet after last week’s bloodbath!
With best wishes
Penny
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The question you pose is whether the appearance of beauty is sufficient without the essence. The story says more than appears on first read
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Dear Neil
Thank you for reading and for your perceptive comment. I’m not going to fib and claim that my story was written to pose the specific question you identify – but that was certainly one of the themes that was in my mind as I composed the piece. The first version had Helen try to introduce a bee to the flowers…
With very best wishes
Penny
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The version you posted is better
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Trust a child to notice and to rectify an omission of nature. Beautiful story, Penny.
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Dear Sandra
Thank you for reading and for your shrewd comment. Children notice everything!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Love that! That’s just what a kid would do, too.
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Dear Josh
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. Kids like things to be ‘just so’, don’t they?
With best wishes
Penny
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Cute! Loved it! I can just picture the little girl spraying the roses.
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Dear Jelli
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you loved the story. I’m glad you could see the little girl spraying perfume on the roses – frowning with concentration as she made sure not to miss out any of them!
With very best wishes
Penny
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I love this little girl who knew what was missing and knew how to fix it 🙂
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Dear Linda
Thank you for reading and commenting. Helen will be a great problem-solver when she grows up, I think!
With very best wishes
Penny
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What a delightful story. I love the way children think.
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Dear Adele,
Thank you for reading and commenting. Childish thinking is often very direct and truthful, isn’t it?
With best wishes
Penny
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Very sweet. A lovely take.
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Dear Lisa
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you liked my take on the prompt.
With best wishes
Penny
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I really enjoyed this, Penny. “A rose by any other name (or lacquer treatment) smell as sweet?” 😊
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Dear Dale
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Clever little girl!
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Dear Dawn
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, Helen is a clever little girl!
With best wishes
Penny
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Awwwww, that’s so sweet, and just like what a child would do, with their innocent way of looking at the world.
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Dear Anurag
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you felt the story was believable.
With best wishes
Penny
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A beautiful flower without scent is meaningless. Daughter is regenerating that meaning between her parents.
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Dear Abhijit
Thank you for reading and commenting so astutely. You are quite right that the daughter helps to hold the parent’s marriage together.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Hee, sweet!
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Dear Ali
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you think the story is sweet.
With best wishes
Penny
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Simply beautiful Penny
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Dear Keith
What a lovely comment – thank you!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Cute ..it’s nice to see not all fictional families are either drastically dysfunctional, U.F.O.’s ,or otherwise out of kilter
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Dear Larry
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed the normal behaviour of my family!
With best wishes
Penny
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Lovely family harmony. The husband sends the gift, the child finds it lacking and perfects it, the husband approves. A lucky mommy indeed and such a sensitive telling.
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Dear Andi
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you felt the harmony at the heart of the family and the story.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Children are ever resourceful. Cute story.
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Dear Violet
Thank you for reading and commenting. I felt I needed cute this week after my bloodbath in last weeks FF!
With very best wishes
Penny
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A very lovely story, Penny. Children can do the sweetest things without a thought. It’s when we grow older, we hesitate and doubt ourselves. Nice one!
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Dear Brenda
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m delighted you enjoyed the story. That’s a perceptive remark about the difference between children and adults.
With very best wishes
Penny
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The ingenuity of children is beyond words. this was a lovely gentle story – which could possibly be very true. Loved it
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Dear James
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. I’m delighted you loved the story.
With best wishes
Penny
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Kids are so perceptive, lovely story.
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Dear Minister
Thank you for reading and commenting.
With best wishes
Penny
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another heartwarming story i read this week. well done. 🙂
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Dear Plaridel
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you feel the story is heart-warming.
With best wishes
Penny
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What a lovely story, Penny and I like how roses which don’t smell don’t make sense to the little girl and perhaps she also wanted them to smell like her mother. Hope she doesn’t get in trouble for going through her mother’s perfume. Kids are usually very heavy handed with it.
My take also has a child in it this week.
Hope you have a great weekend.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Dear Rowena
Thank you for reading and commenting. I don’t think Helen will be in trouble with her mom, even if she was heavy-handed with the perfume!
With very best wishes
Penny
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This is sweet. This little girl is very clever and overall the story gives the feel of a lot of love in that family.
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Dear Gabi
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad the story gives the feel of a lot of love in the family. I’m sure there is!
With very best wishes
Penny
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A touching story, about those precious childhood moments of showing love. Beautifully told.
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Dear Francine
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly. I’m glad you enjoyed the way I told the story.
With best wishes
Penny
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The little one is wise with the force. The smell nose. 🙂
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Dear Stu
Thank you for reading and commenting. She is curious and inventive, certainly!
May 4th be with you
Penny
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Clever girl creating magical romance.
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What a sweet story! Roses without their fragrance are just not the same.
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Dear Heather
Thank you for reading and commenting, Yes, Helen knew what the roses were lacking – and how to supply it!
With best wishes
Penny
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Yay to clever children coming up with clever solutions that sometimes adults may miss the potential of! 🙂
Sweet story, that!
Na’ama
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Dear Na’ama
Thank you for reading and commenting. We adults so often fail to be fully aware of life in the way that young children often are. Yay to all children for being open to the world!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Yay indeed! One of the things I love so much about working with children and having children of all ages be such a close part of my life, is the ever-fresh view of the world they allow me a continued peek into. It is such a gift!
🙂
Na’ama
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I think this is a perfect way to add a dimension to the flower… also very sweet man to notice this… sounds like they still have many years together ahead.
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Dear Bjorn
Thank you for reading and commenting. I enjoyed painting a miniature of a happy, loving family, so I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
With very best wishes
Penny
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What a sweet child, and a romantic husband. Imogene is a very blessed woman.
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Dear Russell
Thank you for reading and commenting. The whole family share a strong love that blesses them all.
With best wishes
Penny
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The little girl is right – roses should smell! A sweet look into family life. Lovely, Penny
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Dear Lynn
Thank you for reading and commenting. Helen would be pleased that a florist agrees that roses should smell!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Haha! My pleasure Penny 🙂
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