“What Pegman saw” is a weekly challenge based on Google Streetview. Using the location provided, you must write a piece of flash fiction of no more than 150 words. You can read the rules here. You can find today’s location on this page, from where you can also get the Inlinkz code. This week’s prompt is Athens, Greece.
Genre: Historical fiction – 17 November 1973
Word count – 150
Life and Spirit Free
The night’s blackness is beaten back by the soldiers’ arc lights.
Stinking exhaust from a tank blows across the road towards us as we cling to the gates of the Polytechnic. Somebody has a radio. My Giorgios is still broadcasting from the heart of our struggle.
“Polytechnic here! People of Greece, the Polytechnic is the flag bearer of our struggle and your struggle, our common struggle against the dictatorship and for democracy!”
Giorgios, I love you!
The tank’s engine revs.
It creeps across the road. Surely it’s not going to crash the gates? There are a dozen of us hanging on to them!
Alex, next to me, yells at the soldiers massing behind the tank.
“Brothers in arms! Disobey your orders! Support us in the struggle for liberty!
‘From the Greeks of old whose dying
brought to life and spirit free…’”
I join in.
The tank is coming.
Aagh! That hur….
Historical Note
From 1967 – 1974 Greece was ruled by a military junta. They used all the techniques of a totalitarian state including arbitrary arrest and torture. Students were at the forefront of the resistance, and in November 1973 they occupied Athens Polytechnic, and improvised a radio station using laboratory equipment.
On the night of 17 November 1973 the army stormed the Polytechnic, using a tank to break down the gates, to which students were clinging. No lives were lost during the assault – although there were many injuries. However, later in the day soldiers shot dead several people outside the campus, including 17-year-old Diomidis Komninos shot through the heart by a sniper.
I have quoted a translation of part of the Greek national anthem, which students were singing as the tank attacked.
Greek National Anthem
I shall always recognize you
by the dreadful sword you hold,
as the Earth with searching vision
you survey with spirit bold.
From the Greeks of old whose dying
brought to life and spirit free,
now with ancient valour rising
let us hail you, oh Liberty
Poor Greece – what a turbulent history! Vividly brought to life Penny – I particularly like your short, stuttering sentences that conveyed a sense of panic and urgency. Thanks for sharing this piece of history
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Dear Lynn
Thank you for your kind comments.
I love Greece and the Greeks passionately. There’s an awful lot wrong with them, but there’s an awful lot right as well. You’re right about their turbulent history; they’ve suffered terribly.
With best wishes
Penny
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My pleasure Penny. It was a fascinating, tragic read
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Excellent storytelling, so vivid and tense. I second what Lynn said about the sentence structure and how wonderfully it conveyed the urgency.
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Dear Karen
Thank you for your kind comments. I’m glad you liked the way I conveyed the urgency. Writing the story was a rather frightening immersive experience.
With best wishes
Penny
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Wonderful bringing to life of a piece of history, and well researched.
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Dear Iain,
Thank you for the lovely comment.
I remember the events with awful clarity. I was a contemporary of the students on the gates. Had I been Greek rather than British I would probably have been one of them.
With best wishes
Penny
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My story was also about Greek liberation from tyranny, but set in a different era. Good job.
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Dear James
Thank you for reading and commenting. Your excellent story was about an even darker period of modern Greek history.
All the best
Penny
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Vivid storytelling, tense and heartbreaking. You really took us there. Well-written as always.
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Dear Josh
Thank you for such a glowing comment. I’m just delighted by your remarks!
With best wished
Penny
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Oh, oh. I didn’t know Greece had such a traumatic piece of history. Good write!
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Dear Lavanya
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, modern Greece has had a turbulent history. We can only hope that matters become more stable now Greece is a part of the EU.
With best wishes
Penny
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Great story. A terrifying time for Greece, a country which has a claim for the first democracy.
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Dear Ali
Thank you for reading, and for your kind comment. The struggle for democracy, started by the Greeks of Athens 2,500 years ago, is never-ending. There are always would-be tyrants ready to seize power.
With best wishes
Penny
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