“What Pegman saw” is a weekly challenge based on Google Streetview. Using the location provided, you must write a piece of flash fiction of no more than 150 words. You can read the rules here. You can find today’s location on this page, from where you can also get the Inlinkz code. This week’s location is Mauritius.
Fresh Start
I was lunching alone at a table for four, watching the sunlight sparkle on the waves and thinking of Randolph. Two years after his death; a breakdown, anti-depressants, psychotherapy, ECT and two suicide attempts later, I was on the mend.
A young couple approached the waiter, but it was hopeless; the place was packed.
I beckoned.
“You can join me, if you like.”
“Really?” They hesitated.
I patted a chair.
“Sit down!”
Ada and Jeff were marine biologists, working on conserving fish stocks. The work sounded fascinating. I wondered…
I thought of the sun, of swimming in that warm sea – imagined the drizzle in England.
“Could i help with the project?”
“How long are you here?” asked Ada.
“Three weeks – but I could stay longer.”
Ada looked doubtful.
“There’s some clerical work,” said Jeff. “Unpaid. It’s very humdrum, I’m afraid.”
I think I may be staying here for some time!
Clerical work in paradise. Of course if it’s unpaid, how could she afford to live there?
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Thanks for reading and commenting, James.
She was lucky. Randolph left her comfortably off for money. I tried ever so hard to squeeze that in, but 150 words just wasn’t quite enough!
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Working anywhere near the soothing sea, would do me fine. Your Luncheon story was simply delicious .
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Thank you, Ivor; you’re very kind!
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Ho, completely different setting to the prompt I selected. Nicely done!
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Lavanya!
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Exactly what the doc would have ordered for her! I could smell the fresh crisp linen, the salty tangy air – very nicely painted Penny 🙂
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Dear Dahlia
Thank you for your encouragement. I think you’re right that her doctor would have approved!
With best wishes
Penny
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A very sympathetic character, with a welcome outcome, in such a vivid scene. I would argue that her means could be implied based on the “anti-depressants, psychotherapy, ECT” and the fact that she’s spending three weeks in paradise. Delighted for her!
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Dear Karen
Thank you for your kind comments. I’m glad you found her a sympathetic character. I wanted to write a happy ending – the last couple of weeks I’ve written some quite dark stuff. Sometimes happy is good!
With best wishes
Penny
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Lovely denouement there. The photo is also great. Looking at the cold midwest drizzle today, paradise sounds pretty good.
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Dear Joshua
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed the denouement. The photo is of Le Capitaine restaurant in Mauritius.
With best wishes
Penny
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Dear Penny,
Sounds like a lovely setup for someone who’s had plenty of drama on her plate. Nicely written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Yes, I think humdrum in paradise sounds perfect for her!
Shalom
Penny
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Touching and uplifting. I really hope a happy ending materialises. I remember visiting Iona years ago and seeing posters asking for volunteers to cook and to maintain the library. “Maybe one day,” I thought, but by the time I retired reality had got in the way.
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Dear JS Brand
Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. Even if reality prevents you from volunteering at Iona, I hope you have the chance to return and visit again.
With best wishes
Penny
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Thank you so much.
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beautiful and so realistic the way human connections can be just what we needed
and I love the photo you chose for the prompt….
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Dear Prior
Thank you for your kind comments. I’m glad you felt the human connections were realistic.
With best wishes
Penny
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🙂
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that is certainly a good thing after such a hard time to have a meaningful employment. and, above all, to make new contacts and to make friendships. A nice story, Penny!
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Dear Marvel
Thank you for reading and commenting. I think it’s just what the protagonist needs to help her recover completely. I’m glad you enjoyed the story!
With best wishes
Penny
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That sounds like just the thing, the best therapy, being kept busy and feeling useful! Nice story 🙂
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Dear Ali
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, doing something useful but undemanding – especially in such beautiful surroundings – sounds like an ideal next step in her recovery.
All the best
Penny
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What a delightful end to your story. No more breakdowns, anti-depressants, psychotherapy, ECT or suicide attempts for her!
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Dear Alicia
Thank you for reading and commenting. I really felt it was time I wrote a happy ending!
With best wishes
Penny
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And you did it extremely well.
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Happy end sounds always good!
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