“What Pegman saw” is a weekly challenge based on Google Streetview. Using the location provided, you must write a piece of flash fiction of no more than 150 words. You can read the rules here. You can find today’s location on this page, from where you can also get the Inlinkz code. This week’s prompt is Rawson Lake in Canada.
Rawson Lake, Alberta, Canada © Alec, Google Maps
Walking Together
Jim slung the pack onto his shoulders and grinned at Stephanie, who said, “Surely that can’t all be lunch?”
“Wait and see!”
They walked, holding hands, beside Lake Kananaskis.
“Oh, look at the waterfall, Jim!”
Churning, frothing white water spilled energetically between the trees.
They scrambled beside the spate up a rough dirt track until they crested the trail. Rawson Lake glowed green before them.
Jim rummaged in the backpack.
“Hungry already?” laughed Stephanie.
Jim took out a tin that rattled.
“You’ve always said you want your nail varnish to be perfect when I propose. I didn’t know which colour you’d want, so I’ve brought the lot.”
Stephanie turned pale, then blushed.
“This one matches the lake,” she murmured. Jim sat in silence as she applied the colour and let it dry. Then she faced him.
“All done”.
Jim knelt.
“Stephanie, I love you. Will you marry me?”
“I will.”
Aw. That’s sweet. All planned out. They seem to be on the same page.
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Dear Josh
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, I think they’ll stay the course; they respect each other and take each other seriously, as well as laughing together.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Aw, there’s a man who knows his future wife well! What a sweet way to lead up to the proposal, although that must have felt like the longest time to wait for nails to dry ever!
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Dear Joy
Thank you for reading and commenting. I thought that about the nails drying too! It must have felt endless.
With very best wishes
Penny
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I can just picture her waving her hands around and checking again every few seconds, just in case. 😉
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That’s exactly the same image that I had!
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Knowing and loving each other for who they are is half the battle of staying together, isn’t it? Lovely story, you softie, you 😉 (I believe that’s twice I call you that, yes?)
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Dear Dale,
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, knowing each other and loving each other for who they are is tremendously important.
Yes, I’m a softie! I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
Perhaps I’d better write a gritty one next week!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Nah…you don’t have to be gritty… unless you want to be!
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Oh how romantic! What a beautiful spot for such an occasion. I started out writing a proposal story too, but your ending is much sweeter!
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Dear Karen
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. I thought it was a beautiful spot for a proposal too.
I enjoyed the story you finally wrote – lovely wry humour!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Oh, what a lovely story… and an awesome proposal to boot! 🙂 ❤
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Dear Jelli
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. That sort of proposal, where Jim shows how much he cares for what Stephanie likes is very romantic, isn’t it?
With very best wishes
Penny
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yes, it is romantic…every girl’s dream to be proposed to in such a loving fashion.
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That is the cutest!
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Dear Righteousbruin
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
With best wishes
Penny
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Penny – thanks for the smile and then the bigger smile at the ending
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halfway through I almost thought murder was on the list – for a short while seemed some of the short fiction I encountered had murder – and then it seemed that went away – and so halfway through I thought, “oh wow – it has been a while since a murder piece”
but it was not –
it was the cutest gesture – the nail polish !
and to many this does matter
and the delight in imagining them waiting for the top coat to dry….
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Dear Yvette,
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly. When I wrote the story, I wondered if some people might suspect murder so I was rather pleased that you did- at least for a little while!
With very best wishes
Penny
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had me interested every single word of the 100
– and wishing you a nice rest of your day dear Penny
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Who wouldn’t say yes to such a thoughtful guy? It is a beautiful setting, and bringing the nail polish along showed us he’s a keeper! It also gave her time to think about her answer, but i suspect the nail drying took alot longer. Id love to see those falls!
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Dear Andi
Thank you for reading and commenting. I agree that she probably made up her mind well before the nail varnish was dry! I agree about the falls, too. They look dramatic in the pictures online, and I bet they’re even better in real life!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Thank goodness for that – wouldn’t want the poor man sitting, watching her put on nail varnish just for her to refuse! Lovely story, Penny, very romantic
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Dear Lynn
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you thought the story was romantic. I agree – it would have been tough writing a story which ended with a refusal!
With very best wishes
Penny
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It’s very sweet and he’s a thoughtful character – a keeper as they say! My pleasure always
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Oh how Stephanie’s hands must have shaken as she applied that nail varnish. you could have made a whole flash fiction story out of that moment… but you didn’t you wrapped that present iwith even more delightful wrapping paper which was a joy to peel away. I am clapping, Penny!
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Dear Kelvin
Thank you for reading and for commenting so kindly.
With very best wishes
Penny
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