Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!

PHOTO PROMPT © RUSSELL GAYER
Legitimate Cause for Pride
“Honey, why are we stopping?”
“That!” said Jack, pointing.
There, on the driveway of an abandoned clapboard house, mouldered a pickup with an extended passenger section.
“Sure. It’s a truck. Can we please get going? We told Mary we’d be with her by 4 o’clock.”
“I just want a quick look. No more than ten minutes.”
Helen pouted.
“Honey, it’s a truck and it’s covered in mildew. And look – there’s ivy coiling round the wheels!”
“Ah, it’s not just any truck, it’s a Vandura. Back in ’62 I worked in Chevrolet’s design department. See that door mirror? I designed that!”
My guess is Helen is going to be late for her meeting. She’s probably not as impressed by the wing mirror as he’d like her to be
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Neil, I think you’re exactly right. Thank you for the kind comment.
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That must have brought back some really good memories for Jack. Great take, Penny
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Thank you for such a lovely comment, Shweta. It certainly brought back good memories for Jack!
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You’re very welcome, Penny 😃
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Flash back! He better only take 10mins or he might be sleeping with the van!
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Thanks for your comment, Tannille. He won’t be sleeping with the van, because he slipped his car keys into his pocket. Helen won’t go anywhere without them!
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Always!
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Somehow I think that 10 minutes is going to stretch out into something longer as he takes a trip down memory lane.
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Thank you for commenting, Sandra. Maybe it won’t take too long. I’ve a hunch he just wants to run his fingers over the door mirror, feel that characteristic curve once again.
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Like connecting with an old friend. Nice one!
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Thank you for the comment, Mason. Yes, very much like meeting an old friend.
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You’re welcome.
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There’s no way that’s going to be ten minutes! Btw, in my story, the door mirror dropped to the ground so now I feel guilty for damaging it
Here’s mine!
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Thank you for your entertaining comment. It is a rather beautiful door mirror, isn’t it?
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A work of art!
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Oh lordy… I now have flashbacks of my late husband stopping to look at displays – either ones he created or others to inspire him. It was NEVER just ten minutes!!
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Thank you for your comment. I hope the flashbacks were good memories!
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Just ten minutes? That sounds like something my wife would say while I’m impatiently waiting for her to get ready before we go out.
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Thank you for commenting, Russell. We’re none of us very good at keeping to time, are we?
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It’s fun to see how proud he is of his work. An unusual tale, Penny, and it fits the image perfectly.
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Thank you for your lovely thoughtful comment, Gabi. There are millions of technologists making small improvements to the stuff we use everyday – like door mirrors on cars. Nobody notices; nobody acknowledges them by name. Let’s hear it for Jack and those like him!
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I know how he feels. There are 750,000 firewall sound-suppression panels in Jeep CJs that I built. 😎
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Thank you for such a wonderful comment, Archon. You’re right – this story was written for you and guys like you who build our world.
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And we thank you for the recognition. As E.E. (Doc) Smith said in one of his books, “Ve can’t all be first violinists. Some of us have to push the wind through the tuba. 😀
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Dear Penny,
Jack deserves a moment or more. Perhaps Helen should just sit back and let him reminisce. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Rochelle. Yes, Jack deserves the chance to examine an old example of his handiwork. I don’t think Helen minds too much – she just wants to be able to say to Mary, “I tried to get him to hurry up, but you know what men are like about cars…”
Shalom
Penny xx
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i bet it’ll take him more than 10 minutes. the quick look may take more than that. 🙂
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Thank you for commenting, Plaridel. You’re probably right – Jack will want a proper look. After all, weeks and weeks of hard work went into that design!
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Cute take on the image, Penny.
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Thank you for the nice comment, Jade. I wanted to honour (in a very small way) the unknown designers and technologists who shape our world.
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You’re most welcome.
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A blast from the past for him. Well done.
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Thank you for commenting, Athling. A blast from the past indeed!
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Nice one, Penny. Different things mean different things to different people, it just depends from which angle you’re looking.
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Thank you for your perceptive comment, Michael. It does indeed depend on the angle from which you’re looking.
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“Congratulations. It’s a wonderful mirror. Can we go now? Please? “
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Aww, Linda! Would you grudge him his ten minute reminiscence? Jack and many, many thousands like him have shaped our world, and received precious little recognition for it. Thank you for your comment!
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Having been married to one of those incredibly gifted people, I know that once they get started, there’s no end to the story. The only way I know to break through, while my eyes are glazing over from all the mechanical details he loves. I start telling him about how I learned to play the piano. . . 🙂
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Nice one Penny, it’s something for him to be proud of. I wonder if she understands the sentiments.
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Thank you for such a perceptive comment. You are quite right. And I think in her heart of hearts Helen knows how he feels. I expect as they complete their drive to Mary, Helen will find some way of acknowledging Jack’s justifiable pride in his creation.
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Great nostalgia and relationship story. As someone who is easily distracted AND impatient, I can see both sides here.
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Oh! I’d stop, too, if I were him! And … who better to get a sense of whether the car’s as far gone as it wants people to think? 😉
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