Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!

PHOTO PROMPT © DALE ROGERSON
The Singer
He would ask Anna out tonight, after the gig.
As Eddie made the decision, his hands shook and he fumbled the set-up of his keyboard,
The gig started. The band played brilliantly; the audience were on fire.
Anna’s voice thrilled him. That slight vibrato – so sexy! And when she dropped into the lower register…wow!
The lights dimmed. The music slowed, grew gentler. Anna was singing a ballad, backed only by Eddie’s keyboard. He felt as though she was singing for him alone.
Backstage after the gig, Anna called the group together.
“Let me introduce Phil, my new boyfriend,” she said.
Oh, this was a sad one. There go all his hopes and dreams! But maybe it’s time to stop dreaming and being a little proactive the next time he falls in love. 🙂
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Thank you for your kind comment, Dora. Yes, Eddie needs to learn from this, and be a bit quicker off the mark!
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Dear Penny,
You set Eddie up for such a fall. Nicely done…but poor Eddie.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for your kind comment. As you say, poor Eddie!
Shalom
Penny
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Is the main character Phil? Or is Phil someone else?
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Dear Neil
Thank you for your comment. It’s not the best structured story I’ve ever written, is it?!
Best wishes
Penny
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You snooze you lose. I had a feeling something would interrupt his happiness.
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Thank you for your helpful comment. The denouement was rather telegraphed, I fear!
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You’re very welcome, Penny.
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Unfortunately it happens every day..hey, better luck next chanteuse
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Thank you, Larry! I love your remark “hey, better luck next chanteuse” – I can practically hear you say it.
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Nice
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Oof! Sock in the gut! Poor Eddie.
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Thank you for your comment. Yes indeed, poor Eddie! All his dreams vanished.
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I can imagine the pain. Let’s hope Phil isn’t going to join the band – there could be even harder times ahead.
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Thank you for your kind comment, Sandra. You’re right – if Anna wants Phil in the band things could get very messy!
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Ouch, I was sure it was going to be the guitar player he lost out to!
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Love your comment, Iain! Yes, the lead guitarist is probably the glamour man.
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Oh, what a shame, the songbird has flown! C’est la vie.
My story!
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Thank you for the romantic comment, Keith!
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Poor Eddy …
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Yes. I guess it was more that he had a crush on her than a serious desire for a relationship. Thanks for the comment!
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Well, still poor dude … but hopefully he’ll find someone who’ll happily reciprocate!
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she having a boyfriend doesn’t matter. eddie has to fight for her. 🙂
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Wow, what an uncompromising comment! Will you hold Eddie’s spectacles, please, while he fights…
😉
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Oh, how disappointing for poor Eddie. Unfortunately, heartache is part of the journey. Nicely written, Penny!
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Thank you for such a kind comment, Brenda. Those first stirrings of love, suffered with heartache but remembered with tender fondness later in life!
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It’s all in the timing! Right after the nick of time. 🙄
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Thank you for commenting. It’s a good job Eddie’s timing is better on the keyboard!
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😀 😀
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Dang it! Eddie waited too long to tell her how he felt!
Wonderful set up!
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Thank you for your kind comment, Dale. I’m glad you liked the set up.
Eddie is a modest, shy man; he never stood a chance with the singer!
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Always the backup never the lead, poor Eddie
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Some guys are like that! Thanks for commenting, goroyboy.
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Love the way you tune into the fragility around Eddie’s hopefulness, which makes the ending all the more powerful. Well done.
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Dear Francine
Thank you for such a helpful comment. I’m glad the fragility of Eddie’s feelings came across. Daydreams need action before they become reality…
Best wishes
Penny
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Aww. Poor Eddie.
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Yeah, poor Eddie. I expect he’ll learn eventually!
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I expect he will 🙂
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