Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!

PHOTO PROMPT © JAN WAYNE FIELDS
Memorial stone
“Rufus!”
The golden retriever ignored me and went on gnawing at something he’d found in a rockpool.
“What’ve you got there, boy?”
Rufus gave a little “Woof” and dropped a seaweed-covered pebble at my feet.
I left it. He brought it to me. I threw it. He fetched it. Repeatedly.
“You want me to take it home?”
“Woof.”
I dropped it in my pocket.
Rufus was an old dog, and died a few months later. I buried him in the garden. There, in my jacket pocket, was the pebble.
Now it sits on my desk – complete with dried seaweed.
A lovely sense of how found objects absorb memories
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Thank you for such a kind comment, Neil
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Memories create treasures. Sweetly told, Penny.
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Thank you for your insightful comment, Dora. You’re absolutely right.
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A sweet story Penny. The simple things are the ones we remember the most.
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Thank you for your kind comment, Iain. Memories and simple pleasures are particularly important during this period of lockdown, aren’t they?
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Aw, what a sweetly sentimental little story 🙂
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Thank you for the kind comment, Linda. Yeah, I’m soppy, me!
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Soppy and sentimental are not the same thing 🙂
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Aw, such a bitter sweet story. Nicely done.
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Thank you for such a nice comment. I’m glad you said “bitter sweet” – sometimes loss of a pet can leave a big gap.
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Yeah, my fur-children are just that, my children, and it always hurts when I lose one.
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What a beautiful reminder! I bet the fur baby’s presence is in the house.
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Thank you, Tannille. I’m sure you’re right. Rufus (in my imagination) was a large dog with a personality to match!
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Touching tale, Penny
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Thank you, CE. I’m glad the story touched you.
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Simply delightful Penny!
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Keith, how kind of you! I’m really pleased you enjoyed the story.
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What a lovely tribute piece. Loved it. brought tears to my eyes, but I loved it.
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Dear Bear
Thank you for such an open response to the story. I’m so pleased it moved you!
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Oh so sweet. I found one of my dogs’ toys the other day, complete with teethmarks. Still brought tears to my eyes after 12 years.
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Dear Sandra
Thank you for your lovely comment. I have the same experience with one of my cats. Like your dog, she died about twelve years ago. I have memories of her that I will cherish for the rest of my life.
With best wishes
Penny
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This is a marvelous story. It really made me smile. My son is over fifty and still has the old dried-up collar from his first dog sitting on his window sill.
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Thank you for your lovely comment. How touching that your son’s first dog was so important to him.
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Dear Penny,
This story is such a sweet one. That stone will always be special. Wonderfully told and heartwarming.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for your lovely comments. Your right – the stone would become very precious through its association with Rufus.
I have to confess to being intensely curious to know why the stones are treasured among the stationery in real life!
Shalom
Penny xx
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Lovely and poignant story.
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Thank you for your kind comment. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
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You’re welcome. And I did.
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It’s almost like Rufus left a gift for her, knowing that they would soon be unwillingly parted. *love*
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What a fascinating comment, Fatima! Yes, perhaps Rufus did want to give her a gift; we’ve no way yet of understanding our pets’ motivations. It’s a heart-warming thought, anyway!
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A little memory of a beloved friend.
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Thank you for your warm comment, Ali. I’m sure Rufus was much loved.
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a loving tribute to preserve the memory of a beloved pet. well done.
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Thank you for your kind comment
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A beautiful story and a wonderful way for your character to remember their close friend. Every time I see a bright yellow tennis ball, I think of our first dog, Charity. =)
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Thank you for your kind comment. It’s intriguing how we choose the scenes that will last as memories, isn’t it?
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Crying after reading that one. They may leave this world but they will never leave our hearts ❤
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Who’s to mind many furry friends lost over the years. Peace.
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