Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz (the blue frog) on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!
PHOTO PROMPT © ROGER BULTOT
Third Age
Well!
Isn’t this exciting?
It’s such fun looking out of the train window. Look – there’s my house, high on the hill!
Hours pass. We’ll soon reach the city where I was born.
We rumble into the suburbs, between scruffy trees that half reveal lawns and colourful gardens. I used to play football with my daughter in a garden like this; she has her own children now.
Tall buildings close in, houses converted into apartments. Didn’t I have a flat in one of these as a student?
What an adventure I shall have, living here for my creative writing course!
There are already stories forming in the mind of this person. Wonderful sense of anticipation, Penny.
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Dear Linda
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly. I love train journeys, because I always find myself telling stories about the occupants of the houses I see, or the towns we pass through. It’s really stimulating!
With very best wishes
Penny
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I also like to create stories with the others who are riding near me. Endlessly fascinating 🙂
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One is never too old for adventure or learning. I can feel her excitement and optimism.
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Dear Nobbin
Thank you for reading and commenting. I agree with you entirely.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Sounds like a great environment for ideas. nice one.
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Dear Anthony
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, you’re right. Trains can be excellent places for ideas – much better than cars!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Great descriptions of experienced memories. I sense a Girl on The Train moment coming
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Dear Neil
Thank you for reading, and for your thoughtful comment. Travelling by train often prompts me to remember earlier times of my life.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Enjoyed reading your imaginative take on the photo prompt, Penny.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Dear Susan
Thank you for reading and for commenting. The photo prompt made me think of the backs of houses that you see as you arrive by train in London.
With very best wishes
Penny
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I love train journeys too, being able to sit back and see where it takes you. Lovely take Penny.
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Dear Iain
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, train journeys are (mostly) much more fun than car journeys, aren’t they?
With very best wishes
Penny
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I love the excitement of ‘going places’ and starting new things even in familiar places. Here’s to a fruitful writing course … 🙂
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Dear Na’ama
Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope you’re managing to enjoy starting new things even during this period of lock-down.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Yeah, it is an interesting time, to say the least. I’m doing fine, all told. It is the maddening governance (or lack thereof) from the WH that is harder to manage than the virus itself, really. But manage we must, so we do, and New Yorkers are tough. I hope you are doing well, yourself! Na’ama
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I’m doing fine, thank you. I’m grateful that I have it so easy, living in a small town on the edge of beautiful countryside. Miss my grandchildren, though!
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I bet you do! It is one of the hardest things for almost everyone, not seeing the kids and grandkids and great-grands. Hang in there and I’m glad you have the beautiful countryside for some solace. 🙂
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sometimes once you leave you can’t go back anymore. hopefully. it’s not true in this case.
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Dear Plaridel
Thank you for reading and commenting. Sometimes you can’t go back, true – like Paul in your story. But other times going back can be a new beginning.
With very best wishes
Penny
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All the inspiration we need to be creative is right there, around us. We need only open up our eyes and minds. And flex our fingers over the keys. Nicely done, Penny. I could almost feel that Muse cranking up into action.
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Dear Sandra
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. I love that you identify how crucial it is to flex our fingers over the keys; it’s so important! When I get stuck for a plot I sit down and type. And type. And type. Until eventually something turns up!
With very best wishes
Penny
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There is something special about train rides. Triggers the mind. The character’s journey is relatable.
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Dear Tannille
Thank you for reading and commenting. You’re right – there is something special about train rides. It definitely has me thinking of stories the whole time, and I guess from your comment that you feel the same.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Dear Penny,
It’s never too late (this side of the grass) to start a new chapter. Love the title that tells so much. I’m enjoying my third age. Lovely story. I felt like I was on the train.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. Yes – I’m enjoying my third age, too!
Shalom, and keep well!
Penny xx
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You don’t need it!
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Oh, Sabina, what a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much, I think, though, that we can all benefit from structured study, don’t you?
With very best wishes
Penny
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So many memories will surely lead to some very creative writing!
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Dear Ali
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, memories are the stuff of creative writing. All those scenes that have helped us make sense of our lives now come onto the page to help us entertain others.
With best wishes
Penny
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What a cheery little tale, Penny!
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Dear CE
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. I was feeling particularly cheerful when I wrote the tale – it must have come through!
With very best wishes
Penny
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This was a fun ride, Penny. So much possibility flashing before her!
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Dear Dale
Thank you for reading and commenting. I love looking out of the windows of a train – so much of life is there!
With very best wishes
Stay safe!
Penny xx
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I haven’t been on a train in years…
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You’ve made the enthusiasm in this feel so real. Very nice right at this point in time!
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Dear Eugenia
Thank you for reading and commenting. I was feeling very upbeat when I wrote this, and I guess it showed through!
With very best wishes
Penny
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‘I’ve always really enjoyed going back to familiar places and meeting people I used to know. I’m not good with new people, places, and circumstances, but going back to currently unfamiliar people, places, and circumstances from my past lets me have my cake and eat it, like a halfway point.
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Dear Larry
Thank you for reading and commenting. Going back and meeting currently unfamiliar people sounds like an ingenious way of having your cake and eating it. And long-standing friends are a great blessing.
With best wishes
Penny
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I can really find the stories coming up from a place where there are so many memories…
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Dear Bjorn
Thank you for reading and commenting. Memories are the raw materials of stories, aren’t they?
With best wishes
Penny
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The person on the train has begun her writing course experience on the train, love all the creative possibilities your story opens up. I love train journeys too – always feel I can be who-ever I want !
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Dear Francine
Thank you for reading and for your perceptive comment. You are quite right that her writing course experience has already started. She has notebook and ball point convenient in her handbag!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Firstly, thank you very much Penny, you solved my problem and are now appointed as my official IT department. 🙂
Trains are great because they take the strain, I write on them a lot because you can concentrate on the life outside the window and register things you might miss ordinarily and you have your hands free to jot things down. Larkin wrote Whitsun Weddings from a train.
I hope you enjoy the writing course.
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Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. I’m glad my suggestion solved your problem. I like trains because you see so many different things. For example, I once saw a priest who was so enormous that he literally occupied a whole double seat. On another occasion I saw major fisticuffs between half a dozen drunk teenagers and three men who intervened to stop the kids trashing the train. All human life is there!
Thank you for your best wishes for the writing course. Regrettably it’s purely fictional!
With very best wishes
Penny
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