Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story with a beginning, middle and end in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!
Photo prompt © Mikhael Sublett
The Historian
The final aftershock took out the floor. The Historian, swathed in cerements and looped with cable from the ceiling, clung to the remaining piece of wall. He assessed the drop to the ground, then jumped, landed jarringly but intact.
He sighed. What difference did survival make? Everyone had fled the hospital. There would be no rescuers. The struggle for life was too bitter for altruism.
A painting on the wall caught his eye. It was beautiful. The artist had thought it worth creating despite the crisis.
The Historian took out his notebook and started to write.
“The Apocalypse was self-inflicted.”
Even though survival may seem pointless there is something in us that wants to leave a legacy. Well captured, Penny
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Dear Neil
Thank you for reading and commenting. You’re right about wanting to leave a legacy.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Finding meaning in disaster is a good coping skill. If it helps him, it may help others, too, in time. For even apocalypse may leave some kind of future, which will become history …
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Dear Na’ama
Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope you’re right that the apocalypse will leave some sort of future…
With very best wishes
Penny
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Yes, I hope I’m right, too. For otherwise, how would anyone ever learn of it ….?
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Oh, this was powerful, Penny! Well done.
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Dear Susan
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m pleased you feel that it’s powerful.
With best wishes
Penny
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It’s important those historians leave something for the next generation to learn from – if there is a next generation!
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Dear Iain
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, truth-telling historians are to be treasured for what they can teach us both about the past and about the present.
With best wishes
Penny
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Self-Inflicted wounds are the worse since they are point blank – I just wish we as a society would stop trying to shot ourselves in the head!
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Dear Trent
Thank you for reading and commenting. I agree with you; I too wish we would stop trying to shoot ourselves in the head!
With best wishes
Penny
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A terrible indictment on our times. Very well told, Penny.
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Dear Sandra
Thank you for reading and commenting. As you say, an indictment of our times. It baffles me why people don’t see the desperate need to tackle climate change.
With very best wishes
Penny
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It needs to be recorded, though learning it was self-inflicted is unlikely to stop it happening again…
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Dear Ali
Thank you for reading and commenting. I fear you’re right; we seem to be terribly slow to learn how to work together.
With best wishes
Penny
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Yes, we can understand and accept natural disasters, but man made – What’s wrong with us?
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Dear James
Thank you for reading and commenting. Mankind doesn’t seem to be very good at sharing, do we?
With best wishes
Penny
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Well done, Penny. We humans do bring it on to ourselves don’t we?
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Dear Dale
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m afraid you’re right, Dale; many of our problems are self-inflicted.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Yes, people seem to think that apocalypses just randomly happen but humanity definitely brings it on themselves. I like the Historian and am curious to know more about them.
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Dear Siobhan
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you liked the Historian. I’m very wary of writing about archetypes, and signalling such by using upper case for their title. In this case, I felt that to do so would emphasize the scale of the catastrophe – the Historian may, indeed, be the last historian alive. It’s also the briefest way I could think of to summarise that history was what defines him (in the same way, for example, that writing fiction defines me).
Of course, if the Historian survives against all the odds, perhaps he will refer to himself as “The Historian”, and then maybe you’ll read more about him!
With very best wishes
Penny
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History. The record of man’s inhumanity to man; also the record of man’s creativity, altruism, and occasionally heroism. The Historian, if he survives, will have quite a tale to tell. Let’s hope he has an audience. Good one, Penny.
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Dear Linda
Thank you for reading and commenting. While it would be nice if the Historian had an audience, he himself has decided that the audience doesn’t matter. He is a historian. He analyses and records human actions. That’s what he does and who he is, and it transcends everything else.
Mind you, I agree that he will have quite a tale to tell to any audience who may read his words!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Made me think of the TV show “The Librarian.” Don’t know if that one went across the pond to England 🙂
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This reads like the begging of something great. You could really take this character places. Good solid story.
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Dear Tannille
Thank you for reading and for your supportive comment. I hadn’t thought of writing a book around the Historian; I’m glad he came across strongly enough to suggest he could be the ‘hero’ of a longer story.
With very best wishes
Penny
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it’s been said that history is written by victors. apparently, it’s not always the case.
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Dear Plaridel
Thank you for reading and commenting. You make a shrewd and unexpected observation about history being written by the victors.
With best wishes
Penny
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I really like the immediacy of your story Penny, the Historian capturing this dramatic moment in time because he’s compelled to. A powerful reflection of human behaviour – creation then destruction.
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Dear Francine
Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comment. That sense of the Historian’s compulsion to follow his vocation despite the end of his world is precisely what I hoped to convey.
With very best wishes
Penny
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“The Apocalypse was self-inflicted.” That’s a great line. The human race does seem to be suicidal. I fear The HIstorian’s efforts may be in vain. Humanity’s not always great at learning from our mistakes.
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Dear Nobbinmaug
Thank you for reading and commenting. As you say, we’re not good at learning from our mistakes. Sometimes, being a historian must feel like being Cassandra, a prophetess whose prophesies were always true and never believed…
With best wishes
Penny
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