“What Pegman saw” is a weekly challenge based on Google Streetview. Using the location provided, you must write a piece of flash fiction of no more than 150 words. You can read the rules here. You can find today’s location on this page, from where you can also get the Inlinkz code.
Pride
“We must have gay rights!” declared Marcel, banging his fist on the bar. “Both parties pledged reform in the 2015 election. It’s time they lived up to their promises!”
Akeem watched him from his corner in the shadows. He loved Marcel’s courage, his forthright way of speaking. Less forgivably, in the eyes of most people, he loved Marcel’s strength, his beauty, his lustrous, curly black hair. He wanted to kiss him, but he was afraid. Besides, Marcel never noticed him…
“We shall have a Pride parade. Who’s up for it?”
Nobody stirred. Awkward conversations started. Everybody knew this was a gay bar, but Marcel had gone too far. Akeem’s pulse raced, and his breath came quick. He stood up and sidled to the bar where Marcel stood, dejected.
“I’m with you,” he said.
That June, he and Marcel danced hand in hand among the rainbow crowd of Guyana’s first Pride celebration.
Such a heartbreaking situation to be in – to be afraid to celebrate who you are. Much as we still have many problems here in the UK, we do at least take it for granted that equal rights are enshrined in law, if not on the high street. Stirring story, Penny, both for the movement as a whole and the touching personal story too.
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Dear Lynn
Thank you for reading and commenting. The people who make Pride happen in places where being gay is still a crime deserve great praise for their courage.
With very best wishes
Penny
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So true, Penny. I don’t understand in this day and age when the world is up against so many troubles and trials, we can’t all get over such things. Not enough love in the world to condemn what there is
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Yes, I agree that there’s not enough love in the world. I think more love is something that we must all work tirelessly for.
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Very true 🙂
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Splendidly uplifting story, Penny. I bet it was something to see.
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Dear Josh
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, it was definitely something to see. You can find a video on YouTube here. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cYYSZntJBUE. They were few in number but showed great courage, commitment and colour!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Dear Penny,
Beautifully written, heartfelt story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for reading and for your very kind comment.
Shalom
Penny
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This story made me smile, inside and out. Very well done.
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Dear Lish
Thank you for reading and for your very kind comment. I’m glad the story made you smile, especially inside!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Wow, what a great story you uncovered and brought to life. So much emotion in this uplifting tale.
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Dear Karen
Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. I’m glad the emotion came across!
With very best wishes
Penny
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I punch the air for everyone who takes the plunge. Never an easy thing to do, even in an accepting community.
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Dear Crispina
Thank you for reading and for your supportive comment. As you say, ‘coming out’ is never easy and it is good to celebrate people’s courage at Pride events
With best wishes
Penny
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Indeed. Not something I’ve ever had to do, but I’ve known those who have.
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