Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz (the blue frog) on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!
PHOTO PROMPT © Nathan Sowers grandson of our own Dawn M. Miller
Reflecting on the past
The eyes gaze back at me. There are crow’s feet at their corners, lashes missing from their perimeter. The forehead is creased, the nose is large, and the lips smile happily. It is the face of a woman who is elderly, if not old.
What changes you have seen!
A decade ago you peeped out tentatively, hardly believing the miracle. Twenty years ago you glared at me with frustrated, ice-blue rage. Thirty years, and that face was darkly bearded. Five decades, an adolescent boy, you stared longingly into a future that it seemed could never be.
Rejoice! Rejoice!
You’re healed!
Dear Penny,
To misquote Rod Stewart, “Every face tells a story, don’t it?” Lovingly and insightfully told.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you thought the story was told with insight.
Shalom
Penny
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Time brings such a change.
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Dear Abhiray,
Thank you for reading and commenting. Time has certainly given me the opportunity to change and grow.
With best wishes
Penny
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This is great. I know the feeling, too.
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Dear Josh
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad the story resonated with you.
With best wishes
Penny
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An interesting take Penny, well done, although the last line sounded a little harsh to me – perhaps that is how some people in that situation see it, as a healing?
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Dear Iain
Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comment. I really appreciate the way you have tried to imagine what the situation must feel like.
The last line is intended as triumphant affirmation of the healing that has taken place. As a transwoman myself, I can assure you that in my case the transition from trying to live as a man to living as a woman is very much a healing.
With very best wishes
Penny
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I had picked up the woman at old age, reflecting on the past as an adolescent boy, and I wondered if it was a typo. But it makes sense now. And I can understand the boy’s sense of a bleak future ahead, having been there myself in a different way. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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Dear Fatima
Thank you for reading and for your empathetic comment. I’m glad you felt you understood the boy’s sense of a bleak future.
With best wishes
Penny
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powerful – and read it a few times – and the timeline was succinctly expressed here –
also, side note – the “ice-blue rage” was such a unique phrase
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Dear Yvette
Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comments. I’m pleased you felt the timeline was succinctly expressed – it was quite difficult to avoid the impression of a list.
“ice-blue rage”. My eyes are blue. I rarely saw the rage in the mirror, but I sometimes saw its ferocity reflected in the faces of those to whom I was speaking. I am so glad to have lost that frustration and rage.
With very best wishes
Penny
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oh – thx for sharing that –
🙂
nice to get to know more about the authors with FF
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What an interesting way of telling this story of transformation and freeing
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Dear Neil
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you found the way I told the story interesting.
I wanted to start with the eyes, which made it necessary to start in the present (at least, it did if I wanted to meet the 100 word limit!). That’s why I told the story backwards – but with what I hoped was a triumphant return to the present at the end. However, as I wrote, it occurred to me that to a large extent I see my life in reverse, with the most recent parts brighter and clearer than the most distant. That thought influenced the way I wrote.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Profound and sensitively executed. In fact, very clever too. Well done, Penny.
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Dear Sandra
Thank you for reading and for your very kind comments. From a writer of your skill they are praise indeed – I’m blushing!
With very best wishes
Penny
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A wonderfully evocative account of the ‘road’ travelled through life. Succinctly told and very powerful.
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Dear Edith
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. I’m glad you felt the writing was evocative.
With best wishes
Penny
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Took me a second read-through to understand what was happening. Once I got it, though, It was crystal clear. Real and stark. Good one, Penny.
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Dear Linda
Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comment. I really appreciate that you took the time to read-through a second time to make sure you understood what I was saying. Even today the trans experience isn’t widely known, so I’m not surprised it took two readings to be sure. I’m glad it was clear the second time through!
With very best wishes
Penny
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I have only limited experience with it, but that experience tells me that the process is full of pain and questions that don’t always have answers. Not an easy experience in any way.
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Wow, Penny… beautifully done. I won’t lie, the comments cleared up what I was not sure I was reading. Once I did, it felt obvious. Thank you for sharing your story.
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Dear Dale
Thank you for reading and for your helpful comment. Even today the trans experience isn’t widely known, so I’m not surprised you wanted to read the comments to confirm your reading of the piece. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Sometimes, I skim through; most times I read them all.. I love seeing the different perspectives.
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I’ve been trying not to focus too much on the past. What’s done is done. What’s to come is the next challenge.
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Dear Stuart
Thank you for reading and commenting.
I agree with you that it’s better not to focus too much on the past. Life always holds another challenge that we need to attempt. However, the past can often be a source of wisdom, helping us to avoid making the same mistakes; and sometimes, as in my story, it can be a source of great encouragement.
Good luck with your future challenges!
With very best wishes
Penny
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What a lovely description of the face.
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Dear Anurag
Thank you for reading and for your lovely comment. I’m so pleased you enjoyed my description of the face.
With very best wishes
Penny
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This is so lovingly told. We’re watching a butterfly escaping from her chrysalis, seeing how much better life is for her now, how much happier she is. It’s life affirming and hopeful and truly made me smile
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Dear Lynn
Thank you for reading, and for your very affirming comment. I’m delighted my story made you smile. It was nice that you used the metaphor of the butterfly; trans people often use it as a symbol of their experience. I’m glad the sense of struggle, transformation and release came across in my story.
With very best wishes
Penny
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It was just so sweet and hopeful and you imbued the tale with the sure feeling that your MC had made the right decision. Lovely
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For this story, I know for certain that the MC made the right decision!
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Wonderfully descriptive and well worth the second read which brought it all into focus.
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Dear Keith
Thank you for reading (and for persisting by reading a second time!) and for your kind comment. I’m glad you felt it was descriptive.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Your words so aptly bring out the turmoil and the struggle faced by the boy and his adult self. FF also gave me a chance to know a little about you today. I am proud to be a part of this amazing pool of talented writers.
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Dear Piyali
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you’re finding FF stimulating. I agree, we have some very talented authors; even better, everybody’s so supportive.
With very best wishes
Penny
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We all peer closely at our reflections from time to time to notice the subtle changes that the time brings with itself. You have captured and described the emotion beautifully.
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Dear Priya
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you felt I captured the emotions conjured up by my reflection in the mirror.
With best wishes
Penny
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I really like the way you use the series of faces as the focus of the story, and what a powerful story it is. Once I read the comments, it all fell into place. Thank you sharing Penny.
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Dear Francine
Thank you for reading and commenting. It’s helpful to know that you liked the series of faces as the focus of the story. It prompted me to realise that I could use reflections in the novel I’m writing, which is a very useful insight; thank you!
With very best wishes
Penny
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So cleverly and tenderly told. Images altering, life changing, step by step towards the real you. A wonderful piece, Penny.
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Dear Jilly
Thank you for reading. Those are lovely comments you’ve made – thank you so much! It means a lot.
With very best wishes
Penny
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lovely stuff, the tales mirrors could tell if given a voice.
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Dear MSW
Thank you for reading and commenting. I agree; mirrors would reveal a lot if they could talk. It would probably be more than we felt comfortable with, don’t you think?
With best wishes
Penny
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Absolutely, different mirrors would have different stories depending on the rooms they were positioned. Imagine if they all changed places!!
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I think this is so beautiful & powerful. The emotions in the piece and the beauty of the happiness & healing got from living as who you always were is just so heart-warming. I love it.
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Dear Lisa
Thank you for reading and for your very kind comments. I’m pleased you enjoyed my story so much. The happiness and healing has been remarkable. I experience joy just by living my ordinary life, because I’m now able to be the person I always was inside.
With very best wishes
Penny
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After reading through the comments, suddenly the story made much more sense and become quite a powerful story of empowerment.
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Dear Subroto
Thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you, too, for reading through the comments to help you understand the story. I’m glad you felt the story was one of empowerment.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Nicely done! I liked the transitions (pun and all), and the messages throughout. Lovely.
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Dear Na’ama
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad the transitions worked for you – it was tricky avoiding making the story into a list.
With very best wishes
Penny
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I too had to read this a couple of times. We need more stories like this. An empathetic and powerful read.
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Dear Miranda
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you thought my writing was empathetic.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Hi Penny,
Thank you very much for opening up with us all and sharing your story. Australia recently voted to legalize same sex marriage, which brought a lot of related issues into the public arena. I know a few trans people and worked in Sexual Heath for a year as a communicator and interviewed a trans teenager for our newsletter, which was a real honour.
I was diagnosed with hydrocephalus or fluid on the brain in my mid-20s and had brain surgery for a shunt to be put in. That has given me a swag of identity issues, which are quite different but also make me more emphatic and compassionate towards people whose identities are more complex.
BTW I have been personally touched by the acceptance of your story by of our fellow FFs, which hopefully reflects a great understanding in the wider community. Too many have suffered horrific cruelty.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Dear Rowena
Thank you for reading and commenting so compassionately. I, too, have been moved by the acceptance of the FF community.
There is still a great lack of knowledge in the wider community, and some prejudice. Some people, even in the UK, have been subjected to persecution and violence and I think all of us have had experiences where we’ve felt threatened, and been insulted. However, fourteen years after the big change, I seem to be accepted just as a normal woman – and every single day I give thanks for that, because to be normal is an enormous blessing.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Dear Penny,
It’s reassuring to hear that your experience has gone so well, and I found it interesting to absorb your desire just to be accepted as a “normal” woman. This desire to pass under the radar and simply be accepted might not be universal but is something so many of us crave for. Last week, my parents had their 50th Wedding Anniversary and most of our family and friends are wealthy and successful and we’re not on struggle street, but it can feel that way at times. I managed to pick up classy $4.00 for my son to wear at the thrift shop and a white trench to go with my daughter’s dress. I had my hair cut and got some contact lenses and I just wanted us all to pass straight under the radar. Tick all the boxes and that’s all. Once the night got underway, all my anxieties eased and people just accepted us as we are and had no big expectations. Indeed, people told us what a good family we had.
It’s reassuring that there are so many decent people who see through all the hoopla and simple accept or reject us for our values and character or lack there of. This is what matters to me these days. No longer need to be popular or friends with everyone.
Love & best wishes,
Rowena
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Dear Rowena
Your sweet and open nature would make you a good friend for anyone.
With best wishes
Penny
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Thanks very much, Penny. It’s a continuous work in progress. Being a good person is very important to me, and thankfully there are so many people who are of the same mindset and want to treat people with kindness and compassion.
xx Rowena
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I suppose to a mirror they all look alike.
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Dear Alice
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Do we all look alike to a mirror? I wonder…
With best wishes
Penny
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a story mirroring life’s changing phases. well done.
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Dear Plaridel
Thank you for reading and commenting. The mirror watches as we change, but says nothing.
With best wishes
Penny
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A parade of faces in the mirror, leading to present happiness. I love “elderly, if not old.”
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Dear Andi
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you liked ‘elderly, if not old.”
With best wishes
Penny
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Once I skimmed through the comments I realised what was happening. It made me think of a sort of time-lapse thing but covering decades rather than a few hours. Cleverly done!
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Dear Ali
Thank you for reading and commenting. A time-lapse record of the life is rather a good way of describing what I did – thank you!
With very best wishes
Penny
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An entire lifespan covered in so few words. Well-written, Penny. =)
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Dear Brenda
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you thought the story is well-written.
With best wishes
Penny
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In reading the comments, I came to realize this was personal for you. Made the story all the more beautiful! =)
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Thank you for that lovely comment, Brenda!
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It may be true that our history is etched on our faces, and using a mirror the past is clearly reflected. However, do we read the truth or pretend our lives have evolved in a different imagined way.
Great little story that brings out our own mindful reflections of life, well lived or not.
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Dear James
Thank you for reading and for your thought provoking comments. You ask, if we have a way of observing the truth then “Do we read the truth or pretend our lives have evolved in a different imagined way?” We could do either – or both – don’t you think? Certainly I have no way of verifying the feelings I describe other than my memory, which is, of course, all too fallible.
With best wishes
Penny
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Wow…what a story of transformation and of achieving what looked like a distant dream once upon a time! The young boy who felt caged is now free as a woman – one that he had always wanted to be. Good story, Penny!
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Dear Anshu
Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. ‘m glad you found the story exhilarating!
With best wishes
Penny
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Great perspective!
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Dear Dawn
Thank you for reading and commenting. It was a fun challenge to write the story ‘backwards’ in time, and that certainly changed the perspective.
With very best wishes
Penny
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I’ve read in one of your comments from last week that you are a trans woman, so I wasn’t surprised. I know very little about the process and can only guess at the feelings. You seem to be around my age and back when we were young, acceptance for people ‘not following the norm’ was very rare. It is good that you and others can open up now and tell other people about fears, triumphs and worries. We all look into the mirror and wonder, after a certain age, who is that person looking back at us. How much more pivotal must that feeling be for a person who went through so many changes. I love how you draw a circle of healing around the memories of worry and anger with the happy smile in the beginning and the rejoicing in the end. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Dear Gabi
Thank you for that wonderful, thoughtful, supportive comment. You are right that when I was young acceptance for people not following the norm was very rare. Indeed, I was 16 before homosexual activity was (partially) decriminalised in the UK, so any gender deviance was completely taboo. Despite that, I can draw “a circle of healing” (what a lovely phrase that is!) both in my FF story, and in my life, because I can now live openly and with acceptance as the person I truly am.
With very best wishes
Penny
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I think when you look at yourself in the mirror and reflect backward you find your different selves and how you transformed… what joy to rejoice the arrival of what you really wanted to be. So many never get that chance.
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Dear Bjorn
Thank you for reading and for your empathetic comment. I’m glad you felt the joy in my story. You’re right that many people don’t have the chance to become the person they could be, and I am very conscious of my good fortune. At the same time, I would hope that my experience would encourage others to try to be the best they can be, and not to settle for anything less.
With very best wishes
Penny
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I like the way you begin in the present, go back in time, and end in the present. Until I read the comments, I didn’t know this story was autobiographical. So glad you can now live openly as the person you truly are.
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Dear Magarisa
Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comments. I’m glad you liked the structure of my story. Thank you, too, for being glad I can now live openly as the person I truly am – that’s a very sweet and supportive wish.
With very best wishes
Penny.
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You’re welcome. It has been a long journey for you.
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That was cool. Didn’t know where it was headed at first. The backwards timeline proved to be a loop to what was effectively affirming and positive.
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Dear D
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad the structure of the story worked for you, and brought you to the positive beginning/end!
With best wishes
Penny
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