Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz (the blue frog) on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!
PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
The Music Teacher
She was an excellent flautist, with a string of diplomas.
Naturally she had to earn a living – at least until an orchestral post came along – so she taught by day, performed with semi-professional bands by night, and auditioned for every orchestral playing job she could.
She married, had children, auditioned in Cardiff, Stavanger and Tel Aviv, and kept teaching.
She taught good pupils to excel, she nurtured slow pupils; everyone caught the joy of music that she radiated.
Retirement came, but she kept on teaching.
I wonder how many hundreds of lives are richer for the life she has lived?
Each discipline has its share of exemplary teachers. It’s nice to see she was one of the best. Why did she travel so much.?
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Dear Larry
Thank you for reading and commenting. She taught only in the UK but she was prepared to work overseas if necessary to get an orchestral playing job.
With best wishes
Penny
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These are nice thoughts. There is nothing better when people can follow a vocation at work. When you can live a job with passion, working hours are not wasted hours, because you feel what you give.
It is sad that many of these jobs are not paid so well that you can live carefree. But I agree, she has made many lives richer and hopefully her own as well!
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Dear anie
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, this career was a vocation for sure!
With best wishes
Penny
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A lovely tribute, Penny. Everyone needs such a figure in their past
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Dear Neil
What a lovely thing for you to say! In fact, I’m privileged to have this person in my present as well as my past.
With best wishes
Penny
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Dear Penny,
The story of a life well lived in a hundred words. Beautifully written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for reading and commenting. It is indeed a life that has been, and is being, lived well.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Sweet story, Penny. She surely enriched many, many lives!
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Dear Susan
Thank you for reading and commenting. She surely did!
With best wishes
Penny
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I’ve been told that a life of teaching is often preferable after a musician has toured for a while and realizes how difficult life on the road can be.
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Dear James
Playing in a symphony orchestra is not for the faint-hearted, and involves frequent touring, but for those with the aptitude and desire it’s extremely fulfilling. Being a music teacher can also be very demanding, though!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Yes, I’ve heard of music teachers in Junior High who want to take an ice pick to both of their eardrums. 😉
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Well yes, in extreme cases! But I was meaning having to teach 130 pupils a week, in groups of 2, 3 or 4, in a dozen different schools, with individual lesson plans for each pupil.
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She was fortunate to spend her life doing a job she loved. And her pupils were indeed fortunate to benefit from her dedication.
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Dear Sandra
Thank you for reading and commenting. If I had had more than 100 words, I might have mentioned the way she could inspire virtually anyone from a high-flying professional to a young adult with learning difficulties, treating each with the same respect and care while making the lesson content appropriate to the individual.
With best wishes
Penny
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Sounds like a real gem of a teacher as well as a first rate musician Penny. I love her infinite energy and pride in doing what she could do to contribute to her craft, even if it brought her no accolades. She clearly benefitted all those she touched. Many gifted artists of all types impact our lives but remain unsung because their lives took a more nuanced path.
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A wonderful gift to spread around the world.
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Dear Iain
Thank you for reading and commenting. “When words fail, music speaks.”
With very best wishes
Penny
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As with all art, it helps if there’s a bunch of money coming in from somewhere. Many of the literary authors are married to stock market managers, doctors, lawyers, etc. Some have family money. Poverty is all-encompassing, and somebody who works 80 hours a week to stay afloat likely doesn’t have much time for creative pursuits. That said, it’s characters like your flutist who make life worth living. I love this character sketch and the thought it expresses.
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Dear Josh
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m delighted you enjoyed my character sketch and the thought that it expresses. Money is not always a good measure of the value that an individual contributes to society, is it?
With very best wishes
Penny
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I wonder if it broke her heart in the end, being deemed not quite good enough to play in an orchestra? I hope not as through her teaching she gave even more than she could have done through performing. Lovely story Penny
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Dear Lynn
Thank you for reading and commenting.
This is one story where I know some of the answers, as it’s more biography than fiction! No, not playing in a professional orchestra didn’t break her heart – although it could have done – because she understood that it wasn’t because she wasn’t good enough, but because the competition was so fierce. There are very few jobs for woodwind players, and many players who would be good enough to fill them. Even to be auditioned is to have the credentials to do the job, and on several occasions she progressed to the final round of auditions. So, wistfulness, but no broken heart!
With very best wishes
Penny
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I’m thinking that at heart, she was a teacher first… no one who doesn’t love to teach, continues to do so…
Ii think in the end she will look back with much satisfaction.
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Dear Dale,
Thank you for reading and commenting.
I’m sure you’re right that she loved to teach; it was a love that sprang from her love for each and every one of her pupils. But there’s no doubt, too, that she would have found a performing career immensely fulfilling.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Of course… but that’s what life is all about. She was lucky that she could use her love of music in such a wonderful way.
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I agree, Dale!
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Well she is still living, stink teaching and even if the career on the big orchestra will not be fulfilled she can start other artistic projects which could bring some different joy!
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She gifted her passion with every student in her presence.
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Dear Stuart
Thank you for reading and commenting. Even though for many years she aspired to a performing career, she taught to the very best of her ability and won the hearts of her students.
With best wishes
Penny
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I guess she enriched more lives this way. Lovely piece, Penny.
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Dear Joyfulness
Thank you for reading and commenting. It’s surprising how much effect good music teaching has on performance across the curriculum.
With best wishes
Penny
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Though she didn’t make it big herself, she helped so many others to realise their dream. Nice!
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Dear Ali
Thank you for reading and commenting.
I feel sure that, given the choice, she would choose a performing career, even knowing what she has achieved as a teacher. But because she gave such love and commitment to her pupils she feels that she has had a fulfilling life.
With best wishes
Penny
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A lovely story of a musical life played out to a sweet and far-reaching closing bar.
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Dear Linda
Thank you for reading and commenting. I like the musical metaphor of your comment. Happily, the person on whom the story is based has not yet reached her closing bar!
With best wishes
Penny
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What a heartwarming perspective, that even if she didn’t achieve what she planned, she still accomplished so much, and had a positive impact on so many people’s lives.
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she had and still will have positive impact, no? And this will bring of course joy to her. Even if she didn’t achieve what she planned, she is still alive. She still dreams of a own musician career and if there is no way through the big orchestra as she planned, there will perhaps other paths open….dreams do not often come true on a straight line of planned steps…it opens often through other people you never thought of….
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Dear Joy
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you found the perspective heartwarming.
With best wishes
Penny
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This part of your opening line is so perfect ~ with a string of diplomas. It fits well with the guitar.
Always reaching for something grand helps keep us excited while accomplishing the day-to-day tasks. The fact that she could influence so many is heart-warming.
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Dear Lish
Thank you for reading and for your perceptive comment. As you say, aspiring to the highest level of performance in any discipline keeps us excited in our day-to-day tasks.
With best wishes
Penny
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What a great story. Although she may not have accomplished her personal dream, she has left a legacy that will continue for generations. And isn’t our real purpose in life to help others grow?
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Dear Russell
Thank you for reading and for your very kind comment. To say, as you do, that our real purpose in life is to help others grow, is deeply humane and rather wonderful. Thank you for that!
With best wishes
Penny
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Love the story… the world needs good teachers like her. There is something in your story that reminds me of Nadia Boulanger… the musical teacher of so many great musician of the 20th century…
She was a also a composer, but was overshadowed by her little sister Lily Boulanger (who died young)… I went to a concert once with music composed by the two sisters… fascinating story.
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Dear Bjorn
Thank you for reading and commenting. As you say, Nadia Boulanger is best remembered for teaching so many outstanding pianists rather than for her compositions. I can’t help wondering how much that was imposed on her by the sexist and discriminatory nature of society, especially during that period.
With best wishes
Penny
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I have a friend whose mother has taught piano her whole life. She is in her 80’s. I’ll bet she would like this story as much as I did.
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Dear Dawn
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly. I’m sure your friend’s mother would have enjoyed the story while vigorously disclaiming any special merit for what she has achieved – good teachers are like that!
With very best wishes
Penny
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A lovely story of someone who inspired, taught and changed peoples lives. Playing music is not just about strumming a few chords on a guitar. Simply delightful.
Click to read my FriFic tale
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Completely correct music is about much more, so as all kind of art is… if people understand or feel what is behind this expression, but in this case I think the person herself gave a value to others not the music. As I moved to another town and had to go on with another pianoteacher I stopped the lessons after one hour, because the teacher frightened me…
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Dear Keith
Thank you for reading and commenting. As you say, professional music making is not just about strumming a few chords on a guitar. I must say, though – and I think the main character of my story would agree – if in strumming a few chords you give pleasure to yourself and maybe a few others, then you’re making music and it’s well worth doing!
I’m so glad you enjoyed my story!
With very best wishes
Penny
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A bittersweet tale: her thwarted ambition enhancing the lives of so many others.
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Dear Sarah Ann
Thank you for reading and commenting. You’re right; there is an element of sadness about the story.
With best wishes
Penny
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Sounds like she was a truly worthy person who made this world a better place just by being herself and sharing her gift
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Dear Michael
Thank you for reading and commenting. Your remark ‘just by being herself’ gets right to the heart of this story.
With very best wishes
Penny
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These are the unsung heroes of our lives – very nicely sketched with few brief but expert strokes. Hope you are having fun at your holiday Penny 🙂
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Dear Dahlia
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. Yes, teachers and carers are unsung heroes.
Thank you for your best wishes for my holiday. Yes, I’m having a great time. We went to Mycenae today and walked around the archaeological site and museum. We have tickets for a performance of an Aristophane’s comedy in the ancient theatre of Epidauros tomorrow evening.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Wow that sounds awesome! Have fun 🙂
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A lovely story of a woman who influenced many and passed on her gift. But, there is also a tinge of sadness as well. Often, this is life. Nicely done! =)
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Dear Brenda
Thank you for reading and commenting. As you say, life is a mixture of satisfaction and sadness.
With best wishes
Penny
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as thomas carlyle said, “blessed is he who has found his work; let him ask no other blessedness.” as a woman it applies to her too.
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plaridel – I love that quote – 🙂
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Dear Plaridel
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m not sure I agree wholeheartedly with Thomas Carlyle.
With best wishes
Penny
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So sad to read the comment about the child being frightened by a music teacher. I hear that too often. But wonderful to read an account of a woman who gave so much to her pupils. The joy she will have instilled in them is infinite. A good teacher able to encourage and nurture and inspire is a very special being.
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I would guess that thousands of lives are the richer – and three cheers to you Penny for the Educators experience you captured.
side note –
when I first read the opening my mind mixed up the letters for
flautist
– had me thinking of
A flatulist, fartist, or professional farter is an entertainer (sometimes considered a comedian) …. bah
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This is bittersweet and yet so uplifting. How lovely for someone to have touched so many lives with her talent!
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We’ve all had one like this, and I would like to believe so much the better for it.
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You only retire from jobs, not passions.
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Very beautifully written. Great character development.
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Many! No one forget the teacher that influenced them the most.
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