Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz (the blue frog) on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!
PHOTO PROMPT © Connie Gayer
The Last Gardener
I’m odd. I like to go outside, walk under the open sky. I was doing that one day when I met a bearded giant wielding some primitive implement.
“What are you doing?”
“Plantin’ beans.”
“What do you mean?”
“I put beans into the ground. They grow, and in a few months I’ll be eating fresh beans!”
He beckoned.
“See this? Proper sweetcorn. Not that stuff you grow in tanks. ‘Nother eight weeks I’ll be eatin’ corn on the cob.”
“You’re going to eat that?”
“Absolutely!”
I fled from him back to the hygiene of the city.
I’m not that odd!
I was hooked from the title
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Dear Neil
What a kind comment. Thank you!
With best wishes
Penny
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I loved that title too – and sad this is a looming truth
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Great idea for yhe prompt. Love it 😊
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Dear Deb
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you liked my take on the prompt.
With best wishes
Penny
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Oh… what a bleak future… may there be hydroponic systems and soil… we need both.
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Dear Bjorn
Strangely, this is almost a true story. When I was young, our next door neighbour was a very keen gardener, very proud of his produce. He and his wife gave a holiday in their home to an inner-city child. The first night at dinner, he boasted “I grew these peas in the garden here!” The little girl was first incredulous, and then tearful. “I don’t like these! I want real peas, out of a tin!”
I agree with you; it will be a poorer world if we can’t enjoy fresh produce.
With best wishes
Penny
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Sadly, I’ve seen some children like that.
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Penny, this reminds me of a time when my son was given real macaroni in cheese, and he said, “I want real macaroni and cheese. You know, the kind that comes out of a box.” Needless to say, I was slightly embarrassed, and don’t think I’ve made Kraft since then. 🙂
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Had to chime in – that is so interesting about the tin.
Earlier today I heard someone say that the corn crops are so GMOd – insects do not even eat them anymore – and then he said there was a book called “wheat belly” hm – need to look it up –
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Gorgeous, lovely memories of my dad. 😊
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Dear Ivor
I’m so glad my story brought back memories of your dad. 🙂
With best wishes
Penny
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The line, “hygeine of the city” made me laugh. Sadly, the joke’s on them. Who knows what’s in foreign grown fruit and vegetables these days, or how they’ve been raised. I’m especially suspicious of corn. Have you noticed how every ear is perfect? No missing kernels, no worm holes. It makes you wonder what we’re eating.
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Dear Russell
Thank you for reading, commenting, and providing the inspiration for my story! You cut a heroic figure with your feet planted in the earth and wielding a primitive implement!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Loved your story – original and surprising. Brilliantly done!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Dear Susan
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m delighted that you enjoyed my story.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Dear Penny,
Real food. Non GMO. Sad for the protagonist and the last gardener. This one, while humorous, makes one stop and think. At least I hope it does. Well done…good use of the prompt.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for reading, and for the nice comments. I’m glad you found the story thought provoking. It will be a sad day if there ever really is a ‘last gardener.’
Shalom
Penny
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Really enjoyed this. I agree with Russ, especially since raspberries imported from China made some diners sick in Quebec last month.
Friends of ours in PA took in an inner city “fresh air” child for a farm holiday. When their children were sent to gather eggs the girl was all gung ho to see the egg trees. When they showed her that chickens lay eggs, she wouldn’t eat another egg all the time she stayed with them.😊
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Dear Christine
Thank you for reading and commenting, and for your story about the girl and the egg trees!
With best wishes
Penny
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It is a scary reality for far too many, Penny! I always think of Jamie Oliver going into American schools and showing the kids various veg and they have no clue what they are… So sad.
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Dear Dale
I agree with you. The lack of awareness of food production is both sad and frightening. When people don’t know the value of something they are all too likely to treat it as unimportant – and you could hardly get more important than feeding the world’s population!
With best wishes
Penny
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It is most scary…
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i see the future and it’s not that good. 🙂
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Dear Plaridel
Thank you for reading and commenting. I don’t know what the future will bring – there are many clever people working to increase food production in a sustainable fashion. But for me, the present means buy local where possible, buy organic where possible, and use fresh not processed food for all my meals. I love tasty food!
With best wishes
Penny
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I find it reassuring to look out at my vegetable patch and know what’s gone in and what’s coming out. Not to mention what happened to it in between. This is such a perceptive piece, Penny.
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Dear Sandra
Long live home grown fruit and veg! Thank you for reading and for your kind comment.
With best wishes
Penny
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Soon to be reality, I’m afraid. What an original take on the prompt!
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Dear Justjoyfulness
Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope that it’s a long time before we stop growing food naturally.
With best wishes
Penny
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“back to the hygiene of the city”
Ha! Ha! Behind the humour of that statement lies an ugly truth. It has been estimated that least 25 per cent of fresh produce is estimated to be rejected because of imperfections or cosmetic damage.
Our supermarket chain has started selling cheaper Odd Bunch which is nothing but “ugly” fruit and veg that previously might have ended in the bin. Tastes just fine to me.
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Dear Subroto
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed my humour. The Odd Bunch initiative sounds like an excellent idea – let’s hope it succeeds!
With best wishes
Penny
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I have always either been a gardener or been associated with gobs of them! I can’t imagine preferring canned over homegrown. For the first time in 20-years, I’m growing veggies again! Tomatoes, corn, carrots, radishes, dill, onions. Right now they look pretty pitiful due to rabbits and deer (it’s the first year for our new community garden and there are a few kinks to work out) but next year!!!! Watch out world.
See? your story brought our memories and wishes. Well done! Thank you.
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Dear Alicia
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad my story brought memories and wishes for the future.
Very good luck with your community garden (which sounds like a fascinating idea, and I’d love to hear more about it).
With very best wishes
Penny
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Yuck, eating food from the dirty ground? Disgusting!
Quite sad – as the world’s population grows, more and more food will come from vats and the like, out of necessity. Only the rich will be able to afford the real thing.
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Dear Ali
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’ll settle for vat grown food if it means an end to people starving. Interestingly, if we were all vegetarians there would be enough food for everybody – although the problem then becomes the equitable distribution of food.
With best wishes
Penny
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Nice take on the prompt Penny. 🙂
Some of us are like that. We don’t really know what, where and how of the food production but we don’t mind much if the packaging is good and the food looks perfect in shape and colour.
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Dear Norma
Thank you for reading and commenting. It would be good is everybody had a clearer idea of where food comes from – we might value it more highly!
With best wishes
Penny
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Nothing like digging up dinner from a home garden! It’s just one thing I miss about living in the country. I enjoyed your story, Penny. It got me to thinking . . . one day I must plant a small garden in my backyard here in Dallas!
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Dear Jan
Thank you for reading and commenting. I agree with you 100% about fresh food from the garden. We’ve only got a small garden, but we expect to harvest beans, apples, tomatoes, courgettes, strawberries and gooseberries this year. I hope you succeed in planting a small garden in your backyard in Dallas!
With very best wishes
Penny
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So sad that he’s the only one left.
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Dear Liz
Thank you for reading and commenting. I agree – gardeners are to be honoured, and if there’s ever a last gardener it will be a tragedy.
With best wishes
Penny
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A great message. Most of us really do not know what we are eating especially in situations where the industry is poorly regulated. Kudos.
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Dear Yarnspinnerr
Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comment. I hadn’t really thought about the contribution of a poorly regulated food industry to our ignorance of what we eat – but, of course, you’re absolutely right.
With best wishes
Penny
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Good story Penny – I liked the dialogue between them. Like chalk and cheese about home grown produce.
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Dear Francine
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, the city dweller has no idea of his heritage – which is sad, because he’s missing out on the great pleasure of eating freshly grown food.
I’m glad you liked the dialogue.
With best wishes
Penny
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Great wry take on modern life, Penny.
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Dear Jilly
Thank you for reading and commenting. Ignorance of where our food originates is an increasing trend, I fear.
With best wishes
Penny
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Great voices. This city-dweller had a lucky escape from country ways, or really should get out more.
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Dear Sarah Ann
Thank you for reading and commenting. As you imply, there is a big divide between city and country ways!
With best wishes
Penny
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Loved the story and it’s originality. It looks like the photo has spurred lots of imaginations.
Isadora 😎
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Dear Isadora
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. Yes, I agree, there have been some very imaginative takes on this prompt!
With best wishes
Penny
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A thought provoking, humourous story that’s so close to the world we live in today. It’s not farfetched at all to imagine all our food to be grown in tanks/labs/artifical environments in the near future. After all, how much of the food we consume nowadays is processed?
Your reference to ‘fleeing back to the hygiene of the city’ shines a spotlight on the modern world’s obsession with hygiene.
Great use of dialogue… it makes me wonder who’s the odd one out.
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Dear Magarisa
Thank you for reading and commenting so thoughtfully. It’s not a far-fetched scenario I fear. Mind you, if it means that we feed the whole population of the world, relying on vat-grown food might be a price worth paying.
With very best wishes
Penny
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You’re welcome, Penny.
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Oh my…this is a little sad.
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Dear Dawn
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, it will be sad indeed if people stop gardening.
With best wishes
Penny
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Enjoyed your take on the prompt and I already chimed in above a little (had to – hope you do not mind) – but now I want some home-grown buttery corn…
🙂 and summer is upon us –
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Dear Prior
Thank you for reading and commenting. What a lovely thought – home-grown buttery corn! I’m glad you joined in the conversation with earlier comments – it pleases me that my story can start conversations.
With very best wishes
Penny
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🙂
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We’re not too far off that. We’ll have chlorinated chickens next. God forbid.
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Dear Patrick
Thank you for reading and commenting. Chlorinated chickens. Hmm. Well, the balance between hygiene and cost/availability to consumers is a tricky one, don’t you think? Of course, the best course of action is to be a vegetarian – alas, I like meat too much…!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Hehe! My dad, who also grows a number of vegetables in our garden, also does this sometimes. “you guys love cities so much. You city people don’t know how fresh these are….” 😅 I loved the ending. The definition of odd changes from person to person and place to place.
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Dear Shivam
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m so glad you loved the ending, because that was my favourite bit, too!
With best wishes
Penny
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Hahahaha great laughing this. Reminds me of my grandparents!
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Dear Laurie
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m delighted you enjoyed the humour!
With best wishes
Penny
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