“What Pegman saw” is a weekly challenge based on Google Streetview. Using the location provided, you must write a piece of flash fiction of no more than 150 words. You can read the rules here. You can find today’s location on this page, from where you can also get the Inlinkz code. This week’s prompt is Tulum, Mexico.
Playa Maya, © Tulum, Mexico
Notes
The name Itzamatul is used by indigenous people of Mayan descent. It means ‘one who has the grace of the sky’.
A ‘bacha’ is a marijuana cigarette, a joint.
The great fish
Mingling smells of diesel and fish reassured Itzamatul as he manhandled his small boat into the sea. This was his place. He lit a bacha and inhaled deeply. Waves slapped the sides of the boat as it puttered along the silver path laid by the moon.
Itzamatul threw baited lines over the stern. Whenever he felt a struggling fish, he pulled it in and tossed it into a bucket. The spirits of his forefathers were with him.
Storm-clouds were massing on the horizon – but wait! What was this?
One line was so taut it was tilting the boat. Itzamatul hauled on it and rejoiced to see a great silver fish.
“Set brother fish free,” said his forefathers.
“It will sell for a fine price!” he protested, but they were implacable.
Sighing, he severed the line and the fish swam free. The storm-driven waters rose and bore Itzamatul safe to shore.
Certainly something mystic going on here. Then again, he had just smoked a joint.
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Dear James
Thank you for reading and commenting. The joint he’d smoked is certainly one way of accounting for the facts, and was intended as such!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Great story, a little like the magic haddock.
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Dear Haunted Wordsmith
Thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you for introducing me to the tale of the magic haddock (ain’t Google wonderful!). I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
With best wishes
Penny
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Great story. Reminds me of an alternate Old Man and the Sea.
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Dear Josh
Thank you for reading and commenting. It wasn’t intended to invoke thoughts of the Old Man and the Sea – I wouldn’t be unwise enough to invite the comparison! It’s much more to do with Mayan myths, although it’s far from a direct retelling of any that I know.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Mythic and wonderful story, Penny. I cracked up at James’ comment though!
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Dear Karen
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m delighted you read the mythical element into it. James’s comment is quite right – the story intentionally invokes intoxication as one explanation for what happened. There are at least two other explanations, one of which you pinpoint; Itzamatul was saved from the storm by the spirits of his ancestors. It is the third (which I will leave hidden so as not to provide a spoiler!) that I personally find most persuasive.
With very best wishes
Penny
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If the spirits of your forefathers talk to you, you’d better listen! Wonderful atmosphere in this story; I loved all the details.
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Dear Joy
Thank you for reading and commenting. You’re dead right about listening to the spirits of your forefathers. I’m so glad you loved the atmosphere; I worked very hard on the descriptions.
With very best wishes
Penny
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It certainly shows that you worked hard on the descriptions. A wee mystery here that goes beyond smoking marijuana. I think the forefathers have a plan for him.
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Dear Alicia
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly; it’s sweet of you to mention the descriptions. Your thought about a plan would chime with myth; it wouldn’t be the first time that brothers had fought against lightning.
With very best wishes
Penny
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Love the happy ending to this “moby” like tale. 🙂 enjoyed it immensely!
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Love the happy ending on this “moby” like tale. Have seen storms at Tulum, and the waves are vicious and frightening. Easy so see him either destroyed or brought to shore. Loved it!
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Dear Jelli
Thank you for reading and commenting. It was only just a happy ending! If he’d delayed by insisting on landing the fish it might have been very different. Thank you for your eye-witness account of storms at Tulum; I can well believe that the waves are vicious.
With very best wishes
Penny
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They were vicious, but oh, so very beautiful! The sheer power of them left me in complete, speechless awe (which is hard to do). If I close my eyes, I can still hear their roar.
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Dear Penny,
So from the comments I gather that Itzamatul had quite a head rush going on. Lovely and vivid descriptions. It seems we invoked the same god this week. 😉 Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m delighted you enjoyed the descriptions.
Shalom
Penny
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A wonderfully told story, imagine it being told by a family group, sat around a fire on the beach… and the great fish swam away…
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Dear Francine
Thank you for reading and commenting.
What a delightful idea to have the story told to a family group sat around a fire on the beach! I might try that!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Very mythical. Great piece.
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Dear Lisa
Thank you for reading and commenting.
With best wishes
Penny
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That’s a wonderful story 👏
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Dear Narasimhan
Thank you for your lovely comment!
With best wishes
Penny
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Thank you very much, it’s always a pleasure reading your articles 👍
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