Every week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (thank you, Rochelle!) hosts a flash fiction challenge, to write a complete story, based on a photoprompt, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less. Post it on your blog, and include the Photoprompt and Inlinkz (the blue frog) on your page. Link your story URL. Then the fun starts as you read other peoples’ stories and comment on them!
PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Genre: Historical fiction
Word count: 100
Mugabe’s Gone
The television booms in the background.
He’s gone. Mugabe’s gone.
I can’t believe it. My breath comes in gasps. My legs wobble as I stand.
I go to my little store room. There is the clock, exactly where I threw it at 11:15 on the evening of January 15th 1983. Shuddering, I feel for the photograph, hidden under some cloth.
Yes. Here it is. I hardly dare look.
My beautiful boy, my son, my Joshua.
“Don’t view the body,” they said. But how could I bury him without looking one last time?
Tears flood down my cheeks, my own Gukurahundi*.
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*According to Wikipedia, Gukurahundi is a Shona word which loosely translates as “the early rain which washes away the chaff before the spring rains”. It was the term used by Robert Mugabe and his supporters for the purging of political opponents during the 1980s.
Dear Penny,
The mother’s grief is tangible. No parent should outlive her child. Nicely done bit of historical fiction.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thank you for reading and commenting. Even in his early years in power, Mugabe was a wicked man, with thousands of deaths to his name.
Shalom, shalom
Penny
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That was a powerful, poignant story.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Dear Susan
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad the story touched your heart.
All the best
Penny
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Topical and powerful, he has left so much destruction and terror behind him.
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Dear Iain
Thank you for reading and commenting. He’s been portrayed as a revolutionary who went wrong late on in his life. This is not a true picture; he has always been a murderous despot who grabbed and held power by murder, torture and terror.
With best wishes
Penny
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Let us hope for better for those people in the future.
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Oh, I do hope so. Zimbabwe was once the granary of Africa. Let’s hope those days come again, and bring prosperity to the people, not just the elite.
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Such a poignant story.
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Dear Lore
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you found the story poignant.
With best wishes
Penny
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It’s easy to shift the blame onto the dictators, but they would never have risen to power (let alone retained it) without the former colonial powers and the CIA. Imperialism in any form naturally spawns the worst sorts of evil. Good story.
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Dear Josh
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you thought it was a good story.
However, while agreeing with you about the evils of imperialism, I don’t think you can absolve Mugabe from responsibility for many evil acts.
All the best
Penny
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Oh absolutely not. He deserves to twist in hell with the rest of him. But if it hadn’t been him, there would have been another in his place. Like Batista, he used the system to rise to power, but many others were also striving for the same end. It’s a brutal world, nowhere more than in African nations.
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The sad thing is that Ian Smith was a very fair man. The Africans in Rhodesia were treated fairly and not as they were in South Africa. Because of this and the lack of police brutality Mugabe walked in and was never a good man. Took the country from being the richest in Africa to one of the poorest. I hope his replacement is going to be a better leader.
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Gandhi.
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Now there was case that shows the difference one principled human can make. True leadership. Real courage. Absolute integrity.
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Yes, he was a hero, and a very clever one, too. He gives us hope that principled humans really can make a difference.
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The grief is palpable. Love how you’ve woven the topical into the prompt.
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Dear Karen
Thank you for reading, and for your kind comment. The clutter of the cupboard made me think of something that had stopped time, an event that meant that the cupboard’s contents had never subsequently been touched. The clock just reinforced that impression.
With best wishes
Penny
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So sad. She remembers she lost him exactly on 11:15 on the evening of January 15th 1983.
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Dear James
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, that was when grief ‘stopped her clock’.
With best wishes
Penny
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This was heartbreaking, Penny. A beautiful tale woven through the shards of the mother’s longing.
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Dear Varad
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you found the tale beautiful. I feel that for some of those who lost loved ones to Mugabe’s reign of terror his resignation may come as some sort of catharsis. I hope so, anyway.
With best wishes
Penny
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I wonder how many people have had these feelings over the last few days? The man was a despot, a murderer, heartlessly killing his own people, impoverishing his country. You wrote this so well, with such heartfelt words and small, telling details – the clock set at the time she found her son had died and the photograph under a cloth, to painful to have in plain view perhaps?
Heartrending
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Dear Lynn
Thank you for reading and commenting so thoughtfully. You are exactly right about the photograph. She couldn’t bear to see it but she couldn’t bear not to have it, so she hid it.
When we hear the television news talk of 10,000 of his political opponents being killed, this, though fiction, is the reality behind every one of those deaths.
With very best wishes
Penny
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A sad thought to consider, but you’re quite right. A monstous man – good riddance
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Love how you wove a story into a most believable situation. Heartbreaking.
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Dear Dale
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly. I’m glad you enjoyed my story.
With best wishes
Penny
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It moved me to tears.
I can feel her permanent pain.
Love the wonderful writer in you, Penny.
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Dear Moon
Thank you for reading and commenting with such warmth. Your tears are testimony to your wonderful, loving nature.
With very best wishes
Penny
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The grief is palpable, and I love a story that teaches things I didn’t know. Well done.
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Dear Linda
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. I’m glad you felt you learned something from the story. That makes the research before writing even more worthwhile for me.
With best wishes
Penny
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Very emotive. And a topical reference which needs to be acknowledged at every level, in all countries. Some closer to Zimbabwe than others. Well done.
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Dear Sandra
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. Watching the News last night, I wonder whether Mugabe’s successor will be any better…we can only pray.
With best wishes
Penny
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You effectively highlighted the tragedy and anguish that lies buried in ‘statistics’. And of course expanded my knowledge base. Thanks Penny 🙂
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Dear Dahlia
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you feel that I have highlighted the tragedy and anguish buried in statistics.
With very best wishes
Penny
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That kind of grief never fades. Well done.
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Dear Liz
I’ve never experienced grief of that intensity, but I’m sure you’re right. Thank you for reading and commenting.
All the best
Penny
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A memory so well portrayed.
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Dear Bryan
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment.
With best wishes
Penny
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This was a brilliant take in tune with a slice of history happening right now!! Nicely done.
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Dear Lavanya
Thank you very much for reading and for your lovely comment.
With best wishes
Penny
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A topical time warp, Penny, which flows so well. I particularly enjoyed the narrator’s rhetorical question, which works so well in first person perspective. My favourite story so far.
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Dear Kelvin
Thank you for reading and for your very kind comment. It’s good to know that the rhetorical question works.
With best wishes
Penny
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Dear Penny
Of course it works, in your prose. I am struggling to understand the other stories this week, everything seems so… I don’t know. It is the first time in three weeks that I have attempted to comment on all the stories here as I did for twelve weeks or so when I first encountered FF. I feel out of my depth. But I shall continue, sink or swim. I hope my comments are helpful.
With best wishes
Kelvin
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Penny… the emotion here is so strong, her grief palpable. Well told. I hope she get some sense of peace
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Dear Laurie
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment.
I like to think that Mugabe’s departure will allow her to finally let go of her anger and start to heal.
With best wishes
Penny
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So poignant…I imagine that the mother of someone like Mugabe would be full of conflicting emotions upon her child’s death.
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Dear Magarisa
Thank you for reading and commenting.
With best wishes
Penny
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You’re welcome, Penny.
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A mother’s loss is such a sad one. Mugabe was always a violent dictator. I hope things improve for the country now he has gone but grief like the one you wrote will never ease for the mother.
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Dear Irene
Thank you very much for reading and commenting.
I hope you don’t speak of a mother’s grief out of experience; if you do – indeed, if anyone who has read the story is in that position – I’m sorry for the pain my story probably caused you.
In this case, she will always grieve, but she may be able to gradually let go of the hatred she has felt for her son’s murderers, I think. What do you feel?
With very best wishes
Penny
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No I don’t have that experience for which I am grateful. I have never forgotten the women in Argentina crying for their lost sons and daughters. Heart breaking and even worse it happens in so many places. But a mother is always a mother no matter and will always grieve for children lost.
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I’m glad it’s not a personal experience for you. As you say, grief like that never fades.
With your experience of Argentina, you may be interested in the novel “The Memory Stones” by Caroline Brothers. It’s heartbreaking, but ultimately uplifting – tbh there were passages that I could hardly bear to read for sorrow – but there is a sort of redemption through love at the end. If you’re interested, I’ve reviewed it here
With best wishes
Penny
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Sounds like it is a good read but I don’t know if I can take the anguish.
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Oh wow. The first topical story that I’ve read in this challenge. Poignant. Thanks.
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Dear Anuragbakhshi,
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you found the story poignant.
With best wishes
Penny
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Topical, poignant and beautifully written. Apt usage of the word – ‘Gukurahundi’.
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Dear Yarnspinnerr,
Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment. I found ‘Gukurahundi’ when I was using Wikipedia to check my memory of the events. I couldn’t believe my luck! It was the perfect word to describe the mother’s tears, with the implication that they were the start of a process of cleansing and healing. I’m so glad you spotted that and approved.
With best wishes
Penny
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Your piece improved my vocabulary. It is such a good word to describe many situations.
Have a great week end. 🙂
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Intense! Good job.
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Dear Roughwighting
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you found the story intense.
With best wishes
Penny
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I can feel how the news of the end of Mugabe could raise those emotions… but I think the Crocodile also have teeth.
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Dear Bjorn
Thank you for reading and commenting. I fear you’re right; Zimbabwe may just have swopped one despot for another. Still, the news was a little more positive this evening. At least the new president is using the right words.
With best wishes
Penny
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Interesting approach to a topical subject. “Gukurahundi” so much conveyed in one word.
Smith’s rule was also colonialism in a different form. While Mugabe came to power in 1980 in a free and fair election, all later elections were a sham. As they say it was just inherited oppression under an indigenised façade. Lets now see how the crocodile smiles.
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Dear Subroto
Thank you for reading and commenting.
I agree – Smith’s rule was pure colonialism. As with all colonialism, it has left a legacy which is prejudiced against the former colony.
Unfortunately, while the 1980 election may have been ‘free and fair’, wasn’t it split largely along tribal lines? And it was very soon after the election – months rather than years – that the torture and murder of political opponents began.
The sad fact is that those with a lust for power can cause so much suffering as they pursue it.
With best wishes
Penny
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And he took so long to go too – clock works so well as a symbol here
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Dear Rachel
Thank you for reading and commenting. The clock in the photo was one of the inspirations for the subject of the story; how clever of you to pick up on that!
With best wishes
Penny
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Such a touching and heartfelt tale.
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Dear Sarah Ann
Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment.
With best wishes
Penny
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What horror evil leaves behind. The power of a mother’s grief is palpable in your poem.
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Dear Susie
Thank you for reading and commenting. I agree; evil leaves horror behind.
With best wishes
Penny
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Well … when you come to the party late there’s little left to eat.
It looks like everyone has said what I was thinking already … heartfelt, touching, thought provoking …
I agree with all who came before me. : )
Isadora 😎
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Dear Isadora
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂
With very best wishes
Penny
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This is a lovely tribute to all the people killed for political reasons. It’s very timely and good writing Penny. —- Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne
Thank you for reading, and for your kind words.
With best wishes
Penny
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Such a powerful and eloquently told story – well done.
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