A Resourceful Rogue
“What Pegman saw” is a weekly challenge based on Google Streetview. Using the 360 degree view of the location provided, you must write a piece of flash fiction of no more than 150 words. You can read the rules here. You can find today’s location, St Petersburg, Russia, on this page, from where you can also get the Inlinkz code.
“So many tourists, and not an ounce of piety among them,” thought the babushka, as she pushed her way into the gorgeously decorated interior of the church. Sergei, the beggar, didn’t bother to call to her. He knew she would give him nothing; she was probably nearly as poor as he was.
Ah! Americans! Sergei checked the police weren’t watching. He noticed a young woman’s eyes flick over him. “I’ll try the ‘Sick child’,” he thought.
“Please! My child is sick.”
“Oh, how awful!”
Stella pressed a ten-dollar bill into Sergei’s hands, smiled at him, and entered the church.
“Which icon is Jesus?” she asked. The babushka sniffed at the woman’s ignorance.
Jesus gazed down compassionately on them, the old woman remembering hunger from the long-distant past and the young one hungry for culture and the future. He grinned as he looked at Sergei. He’d always loved a resourceful rogue!
For those who are interested in Jesus’ love for a resourceful rogue, the biblical reference is Luke 16 vv 1 – 13
There is a wonderful way about this piece. It arches and circles its way around the parties as it makes its way to the message. It works so beautifully with the picture you chose too.
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Thank you, Karen. That’s a very kind comment. The decoration inside that ‘church’ is unbelievable.
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I delightful take on the prompt. So many personalities present = including Jesus himself.
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Thank you for the comment, Alicia. I wanted to do a ‘compare and contrast’ type story. Poor, devout, mean old Russian woman, life full of hardship; rich, American, casually kind-hearted, earnestly seeking culture through travel, to whom ten dollars is insignificant – but who at least recognises need on a personal level; and Sergei, the resourceful rogue!
I don’t have the skill to do it justice in 150 words, but it was fun trying!
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Oh, I think you did a very good job in 150-words.
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This is an accomplishment! Getting so much background about so many characters into 150 words. Well done indeed.
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Dear Alicia,
It’s very kind of you to say so. Thank you!
Best wishes
Penny
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Dear Fluid Phrase,
Thank you for your kind words. It was another stimulating prompt this week!
All the best
Penny
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Dear Penny,
An intriguing interpretation of the Bible story. I enjoyed the contrasting characters. Well written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you for reading and commenting – and for your kind words about the contrasting characters.
Live long and prosper!
Penny
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A nice Sunday morning prose for me here in Geelong , on this gloriously sunny day (finally)
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Dear Ivor
Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad the weather’s better for you now!
All the best
Penny
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Lovely piece, and I like the reference. Well done
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Dear Josh
Thank you for your comment. Praise from you is praise indeed!
With best wishes
Penny
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I love the subtlety , the eloquence ,the wit and depth in your stories. So many beautifully relevant messages in so few words .
Thanks for the Biblical reference . Will look it up .
Love and best wishes…
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Oh, wow, Moon, you’re so kind. Thank you for the fulsome comment!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Taking Bible stories and bringing them to life in the modern day, for a modern audience is a gift. And you are gifted, Penny, so very gifted. I love this. 😇
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Dear Kelvin
Thank you for your very kind comment on my story. I’m delighted you enjoyed it so much. You, yourself, are a consummate wordsmith, and I suspect you have used the words ‘gift’ and ‘gifted’ very deliberately. I shall take that seriously.
With very best wishes
Penny
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There is something so pure and beautiful about this piece Penny. Very well done!
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Dear Dahlia
What a lovely comment – thank you!
With very best wishes
Penny
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Such a delightful piece that shouts out purity and piety. Excellent write and great photo prompt too.
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Dear Lavmuses,
Thank you for reading and commenting on my story.
All the best
Penny
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Well, He helps those who help themselves… nice one!
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Ali.
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Loved the constrast, comparison and how each character had an individuality or the lack of it…
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Ritika!
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Dear penny,
Only while going through your blog yesterday I glanced at resourceful rogue and thought, ‘i know this one…’
And I realised I actually had visited your blog before I revisited it again through the the comments…
Someone had once told me, you might forget the name of the person but if s/he is introduced with a story you tend to remember them. Something of that sort has happened I think 😀
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